| "The Pure Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil NSI On: March 06, 2006 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this is awesome! hinata gets pissed, kills 'em all. But...its not her fault! let her go with itahci goes he's sexy!
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Reviewed By: rose0804 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the innocent hinata, who would've knows she was so deadly. i can't wait to see more!!
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Reviewed By: Hyuuga Ayame On: November 13, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this!!! It's about time someone made Hinata snap! This is a very nice fic and I like where you're taking it. Umm.. maybe you should leave someone behind like what Itachi does with Sasuke, either Neji*HintHintCoughCough* or Hanabi. Please continue and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: rose0804 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the story. Well, I think it would be interesting if Hinata leave Neji alive like itachi. But, I don't think the real Neji (If this really happend in the manga) will revenge for them (Hinata's family) but who am I to say?
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Title: The Pure Dawn
Reviewed By: Cookie6 On: November 03, 2004 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I love it. I hope that Hinata kills them all...except for Neji. Leave him behind like Itachi left Sasuke. It would make more sense to leave Hanabi behind but I don't like her and I totally love Neji. Anyway, it's a great story and I hope you update soon.
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