| "Another day, Another memory" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Another Day, Another Memory
Reviewed By: magerm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:18 CDT
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I really love your story. It's great! I can't wait for the next chapter! But, I didn't really understand Chapter 8.
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Title: boo!
Reviewed By: enerahs On: November 30, 2004 22:04 CST
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gimme a naruxkaka pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loveyou*not tat way!! =_=*loveyou.loveyou.loveyou.loveyou.loveyou
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Reviewed By: im twilight aura!^^ On: November 30, 2004 15:36 CST
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hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmm....still havent decided yet-_- but anyways i just luv the update!^^especially haku !^3^!
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Reviewed By: drakedragon1 On: November 18, 2004 15:44 CST
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I vote hinata and naruto. Even though narutos a girl in this story, its to wierd having him with a guy. There are to many stories with him and sasuke.
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Reviewed By: kurai_kodoku On: November 07, 2004 22:39 CST
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LoL, luv the story...Poor Neji not much time with Naruto alone. Scary though how Hinata is...*shivers* Never would think of her as a stalker. I'd vote for NejiNaru!! Anyways love the reference to Airmaster in chapter 2...lol, luv that anime.
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 15:34 CST
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luv the story!^^and especialy naruto!^^if i had to chose the pairings it would be sosuke and naruto!^^but then when neji said naurot was cute i want him to be with naruto but i wont decide yet till the next chappy so update please!!!!!^^then ill decide for sure!
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Reviewed By: Niji On: November 04, 2004 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahem, I can't really vote on a pairing now, since I believe you have not introduced all the pairings XD; but for now I guess it'd have to be KibaNaru XD ...second SasuNaru You narrate things in a cute way. It makes the story seem light and amusing [and well, it is]. But is this in a first person POV? Because with the few "I"s and "me"s and other such pronouns I saw, it made it seem like it was O_o The plot seems interesting, especially since you turned Naruto-kun into a girl :D And it's nice that you included Naruto's 'affection' for Sakura XD It makes it all the more...interesting *cackles* The chapters need a wee bit more of organization and stuff. It needs a little tweaking with the grammar. Just a little ^^; I suggest you get a beta-reader or something to help you with your chapters. XD So anyway, continue!!! >3 Or I'll hunt you down and force you...>D *cackles like a weirdo*
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Title: Another day, Another memory
Reviewed By: Cookie6 On: November 03, 2004 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I love it. Update please.
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