| "Braving Mystical Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Title: Temp Hold
Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 20:23 CST
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'Chapter 9: Evolution' will not be coming out for a couple of months. I decided to put this fic temporarily on-hold due to the fact that I want to be able to finish a large portion of some of my other fics. Don't worry; I'm not going any way... and I WILL return to finish up this story. The ideas really aren't going anywhere. As for pairings? What fun is it if I give away the bank??? I will reveal that Rogue and Sesshoumaru are one of the pairings, however, and we'll see, hopefully next chapter, how that comes to be. Have no fears... I have never quit any thing in my entire life (delayed & put on hold, yes; quit, no). ~Jazz~
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent newer chapters.... so sorry I did not review sooner...you are planning to continue right ???? And a Kag/IY romance ???? will it be there???
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Reviewed By: StarX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent piece of writing. keep up the good work. what are the couplings besides the lance/ kitty/ kouga thing. will there be any more couples. i've never seen a rouge/ sessohomaru couple and that would be interesting. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: StarX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is highly interesting to read. update soon. what are the couples going to be? will rouge be coupled w/ someone other than remy? does kitty like kouga more than lance?
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Title: For chapter 8
Reviewed By: demonangel90 (not logged in) On: January 26, 2005 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, ONE, it is Scott not Scot. TWO, You dudn't say his name ONCE during the chapter and that was what really confused me. THREE, you had gone completely off track and had made the scene oh so confusing. I seriously didn't know WHAT was going on. I was all confuzzled and so were meh muses. Please, do you think you could make it more clear? I really enjoy this story, it has a beautiful plot.
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Title: Test 1-2-3
Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 21:00 CST
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 20:39 CST
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it** sorry, miss spelling gets me!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this was good but a little unorganized and random. When you scene change better make sure it starts with the character's name (the character whose point of veiw you are writing from) so we know what's going on. Also, put more description in it too along with better puntuation. Describe more about the characters' actions and what their reactions to others are. It would make things more clear. I was good overall.
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting - are you going to have Kag and IY be an item? Sorry if I end up reviewing twice having troubles figuring out mediaminer... hope the next chapter is longer
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Reviewed By: kaja1234(NLI) On: January 12, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have one word too say to you: COOL!!!! i love da fic, update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: libraflyter On: January 11, 2005 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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You have me anxiously awaiting more. I wonder if Rogue will absorb Sesshoumaru - that would give her a *real* headache compared to her current merry-go-round of Inuyaha fun. And what's going on with the rest of the X-men? ^_^
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Reviewed By: libraflyter On: January 10, 2005 14:22 CST
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I like how you're mixing the two, especially the part with Rogue - her powers make any battles and interactions interesting, and you're using her well.
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 20:17 CST
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its diffrent, but in a good way, and its x-men Evolution, not just pain x-men
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Reviewed By: lilmizflashythang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue it I think Kouga might have a problem
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Reviewed By: Kellen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 00:53 CST
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Very fun idea. You put two of my favorites together: Kurt and Inuyasha :o) Your style is very nice, and I enjoyed reading. One little beef, though: If by "Aurora" you meant Storm, her name is actually spelled "Ororo". Again, loved the story, and if you are still in need of betas, just let me know: kellenanne@yahoo.com kellen@writing.com
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-delirium [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 23:39 CST
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bob like very lot
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