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| "At A Bad Time Like This" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: trapt_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fun read, that's for sure. Some of the grammar caught my eye for minor mistakes, but other than that, it's a pretty good story you've got here. Another PWP for Initial D (why are there so many of those for this catagory?), and this time it included a twist in the form of a little sister. I have to say that that kept things interesting. One thing I did wonder was whether or not you knew about their cousin. I'm not sure if she's in the anime or not, but in the manga, Tsugumi is the younger, female cousin that Ry takes care of. I just thought that the sister's role was somewhat similar to the cousin (if ever you wanted to imagine their cousin getting drunk and in bed with them...). Well, overall, it was a good story, and I'd look to see more from you.
| Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das bloot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, Raven-san! You really should write more stories! Be sure to post your DOA one! Hee hee!
| Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Different, very different. Great to see Takumi as a straight man though, instead of bi or homosexual.
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