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| "But If It Had To Perish Twice" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: May 21, 2006 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pats self on back* Enough for me, go treat your self good for writing so many beautiful things. Meh. I'm half dead, and haven't slept in 24 hours, but I'm not the type to not give due when deserved, and you definately deserve some tlc, as well as some ego stroking. I'm going to sleep now, good AM.
| Reviewed By: starline On: November 30, 2004 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent follow-up, a great read! I completely disagree with you friend, most readers aren't stupid. Readers have to be intelligent. It's the ones who can see the words and know their meaning, but never read, that are stupid. Readers are not. Keep up the great work. starline
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 10, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Channeling reading is very fun. You really don't have to worry about most readers being stupid, you just might note that not all of them are Christian, or not devoutly Christian (like me ^^;;). Does that take away from the story? Not enough to make it un-enjoyable, but we might not get everything you envisioned out of it. Still, thank you for the spoilers at the end, they did help me to notice some of what your were trying to get across.
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