| "Sesshoumaru, sit!" Reviews/Comments [ 158 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chrissy14 On: February 01, 2005 21:05 CST
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YAY!! NEW CHAPPY AGAIN!! lol I've been checking back again and again, hoping, no...praying for a new chap!! *sniffle* Anyway! Super! I just lo-o-o-ove how he can't get Amaya outta his head! I am really really really looking forward to yer next chappy! *and please explain: what is Amaya? I'm confuzzed* =)
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Reviewed By: evilsmiley On: February 01, 2005 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good and you really made it so sesshoumaru's personal side comes out a lot more than usual with out changing wat we already know about him..damn...good....you better finish soon or i'll be very angry...hehee....but really this is a great story and i can't wait to hear the end..but you better not just drop off like most of the other facfics i've read..bubye
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Reviewed By: Delu (not logged in) On: February 01, 2005 08:36 CST
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Ok, first the unpleasantries..."only reason she seized crying" according to this, Rin abroubtly grabbed crying (??). I think what you want instead of seized is 'ceased', which means ended. Aside from that, AHHH! It was so cute! "I don't always have nightmares about tests" I absolutely love it, you are always so original and fresh with your chapters. I don't think I've ever read anywhere the point of view of someone inside Miroku's windtunnel; I hadn't even really thought of it! We are going to find out what Amaya is soon, right? *soulful puppy dog eyes* Cause you're killing me here with curiousity! ^_^ Somehow I knew the fairy would have to be of some help somewhere along the road. So, will Miroku at any time be ragging on Inu about hugging Kagome in the middle of the night (even if it was in comfort) in payback for getting thrown in the river? Oh, is Sessy in hot water when Amaya gets away from Naraku. I can't wait! I think Sesshomaru was written especially well in this chapter, with the thoughts in his head and the breaking of the mirror. He doesn't seem worked up, but all of us true fans know his is (in comparison to other fanfics in which Sessy is suddenly more expressive than a drunk gay man). Oh, so well written and what a wonderful chappy! As always, am excited for more ^_^ It is so wonderful all the new reviews you are getting! I'm glad you're getting the attention you deserve, and I'm proud to have been one of the first of your fans ^_~.
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:51 CST
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Hehe, looks like the dog demon can't get the hell cat out of his mind. I find that one fact quite entertaining. Keep up the good work, it's great!
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Reviewed By: llama On: January 31, 2005 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MAN! this wuz the best fic i've ever read! you've got to keep writing! I'm typing this on 1/31/05 and it is 2:30am in the morning ON A SCHOOL NIGHT!! so you had better update soon! Well i'm sugar high right now so don't mind me! g2g! Night!
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Title: Great Chappie!
Reviewed By: Melfire63-logged out On: January 25, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chappie! Glad you finally Updated. Wow, you're too kind to thank me in yur fic, cough, I wouldn't, your nicer than me! Well keep in touch, and blah blah blah, keep typing!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who is she?! IS she the first preistess who the jewel came from?
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Reviewed By: Kai Maiko (Not Signed In) On: January 25, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Terrific! The Greatest Sesshoumaru Story EVER!!! Wow! I can't stop raving about this story! I loved it! It is the BEST Sesshoumaru story EVER! And i've read a LOT of them. PLEASE!!!! You MUST write more of this story! Never stop! NEVER!!! (Fades with manical laughter) *cough* Sorry. Hehehe. I LOVE IT! MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!.......(fade)
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Reviewed By: Delu (not logged in) On: January 23, 2005 11:43 CST
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YAY! There's a new chappy AND I can post again!!!! No cliffies?! *cough* would like to remind we have NO idea what Amaya is to Naraku, how she's going to get away, what the deal with her "identity" is, etc etc! You are doing SUCH a good job with the relationship between Miroku and Sango, such a new approach to it and so well written. To bad they'll have a PDA-phobic hanyou with them ^_~ And don't fret about the wait. I'm just glad you came back, I was worried perhaps something bad had happened to you, I'm a worrier like that, so I'm just glad none of my fears were correct ^_^
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Reviewed By: icyjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 02:40 CST
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Wow, I really love this story! Thanks for writing it! Also, I think you're doing very well at keeping Sesshoumaru in character (even if that means he has to be a stubborn idiot sometimes, grrr). The fairy was a very nice touch as well. This story also makes me laugh out loud, which is awesome. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Chrissy14 On: January 22, 2005 21:50 CST
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YAY! New chap! I'm jumping for joy here...but poor Amaya!! Yes Sessy is being a bit of a jerk, but that makes it all the more sexy when he's sweet again! (at least I hope he's sweet again) Anyway, I just adore your fanfic, it's awesome! I can't WAIT for another chapter! *dreams about Sessy again..*
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Reviewed By: Kangabee On: January 21, 2005 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is wonderful wonderful!! I am soooo absorbed into this fanfic, I LOVE it!! I am really looking forward to your next chapter...*hoping for another love seen*....heehee...they make such a great couple! I LOVE IT!
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Title: Yes Sit boy Sit!
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story Please add more chapters soon thank you.
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Title: WOW.......
Reviewed By: Melfire63 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm not really a good critic, but this is one of the BEST ficsa I have ever read! Plz keep the chaps comin, and keep in touch with the updates! I'm not sure u'd want 2, but I'd be cull if u read my inu fic: Captivated. I also have a Ranma fic, but it sucks. Any way I hope u email me or somethin when u update. Domo! luv, Mel
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Title: *snicker
Reviewed By: Fox_Inu_Koorime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holding sides desprately* *fails* HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! WHOHEHEHEH!! My God, I don't know where you come up with this stuff. Fat faeries, I mean really, it just makes it soo much fun. Oh, I just love your fic so far, it makes me go: YEAH!! *bounces off walls* Sessho: Baka onna... Me: *sticks out tongue* Sessho: Put that back in or I will remove it. Me: *ignores* *walks over to computer* *types* Sessho: W-What are you doing...?! Me: *cackles* (POOF) Sessho: NOO!!! AH!! *appears in a bright purple kitty costume w/ whisker* Hehe... Gomen, got off track. Newayz... Keep writing this super duper ficcy. Bye for now!! Ja!! Sessho: CHANGE ME BACK!!!
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