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| "Sesshoumaru, sit!" Reviews/Comments [ 158 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 04:44 CST
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EEK! I hate naraku, that evil bastard! He had better not steal rin...or Amaya for that matter! I must now go torture naraku and Kouga some more in my comedy fic on animespiral, I'm putting naraku in a pink dress! and then he can have a tea party with all his stupid minions, except Kagura cause I like her. I have a wierd imagionation.......it loves to embarass inuyasha characters in the stupidest ways...
| Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 23:09 CST
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It'd be funny if Amaya was allergic to Naraku....or pure evil :) And of course I'd read the next chapter! There's no way you can stop me now! Besides that, cliffies are good for the soul. Never feel ashamed to have your readers jump off them. Heheh. Parsnip
| Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: all_inuyasha_male_character_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this story, PLEASE keep on writing it! your making me suffer...:-D anyways, if you cant tell, i truely LOVE the story so far and i have it bookmared so i can check it daily for those new chapters *eyes* believe me, your an affective writer lol
| Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 17:53 CST
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Heheh, I love how you made him ALMOST thank Ayama for sitting him in the castle :) Well done! (must finish reading the rest now....)
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 10:12 CST
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Yeah I can finally review again(My computer was being evil and not letting me!) Keep up the good work! Dog demon and hell cat? hehe that was funny!Though I'm asuming the "arn't we just perfect for each other" was meant for sarcasm purposes right? Poor sesshy didn't catch that...oh well, GREAT JOB!
| Reviewed By: Delu(not signed in) On: December 27, 2004 10:25 CST
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Aaiieee! Like it? I love it!!!!!!! Wow, what didn't you cover in this chappy? There was humor (Inuyasha hiding from Amaya in the tree, too funny!), awww cuteness factor with Rin, angst with a very well written, I must say, Kagome bringing up the issue of Kikyo to Inu, action with Sesshy and the furry demon, and a fluffy love scene (litereally, with the Fluff! LOL) side note, I found out in a different fan fic that Rumiko actually gave a name to the fluff and it's Mokomoko-sama!! Isn't that a riot?! The fluff has a title of honor! Anyway, I loved how she compared ruining the Lord to her ruining Ah-Un ^_^ One question though, had Sesshy already forgotten getting sat by the time she was in the library to have let her get away without 'comment' on the issue? YAY! I reviewed this chapter!! Oh, and I've been slacking....REVIEW PEOPLE!!!! Kudos to Kyonaria, the yummy peanut butter and chocolate kind ^_~
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 22:26 CST
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great chapter once again, I really hope inuyasha sees Sesshomaru being sat though! that would be so damn funny! I can JUST imagion the look on sesshy's face when inuyasha busts out laughing....
| Reviewed By: Delu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 11:56 CST
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Well, my rating now is one review per two chappies it seems...I burst out laughing during the part where Amaya kindly tells Kag and Inu to SIT down and make themselves comfortable. Too funny! The relatives thought I was nuts, but oh well, nothing new. The chappies were good. To be honest, for finding things wrong, I think the only thing I've ever found was a mixed up you're for what should have been a your once So I must say that your grammer has been brilliant in your writings. As for my christmas, I got a scanner printer along with my new laptop, so I might scan some of my (very) beginner drawings in for review and suggestion here at mediaminer (since I had to get an account to review, lol) Hope your christmas was wonderful as well, and keep up the good work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 18:52 CST
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Yet another great chapter, I'm putting this storie on my favorites list!!!
| Reviewed By: Delu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 21:58 CST
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*sob* I didn't review last time! I was rushing due to finals, and then the holidays, it's insanity here! And as for adore, yes, yes, yes, I adore it! Oh, so good! And funny! And, sigh, if I keep going, I'll be here all night. What a wonderful Christmas gift! Lol, "seductive" and "Ginta" just don't seem to fit well in the same sentance, for some reason. Too funny! Well, have happy holidays, whatever you celebrate, and I'm in too good of a mood (and feeling too guilty for not having reviewed earlier) to rant this time ^_^
| Reviewed By: Delu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 11:59 CST
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LOL whoops, forgot my one question. Why was the work books underlined each time it appeared?
| Reviewed By: Delu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 11:57 CST
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That was soooooooo cute with Ginta and Hakkaku! Have you by chance seen the epi where Kouga meets Sessy? Not only is it yummy cause it's got the two most gorgeous men at the same time, it is hilarious to see Kouga's right hand men and Sessy's self proclaimed right hand toad argue about whose master is better. Hikkaku introduces himself as "the one with biceps" and Ginta then introduces himself as "the one with dimples" It was so cute! It hasn't been translated by Viz yet, though. *cough* anyway, your story. Yay! Amaya taking on a spoiled demoness! And of course the "aw, cute!" infusion with the appearance of Rin. Kudos on the library scene. I would just die if I looked out a window to see the wolf prince fighting and calling for me *utter melt* And I'll tone it down on my review rant. The people I'm ranting at don't see it anyway, as it is in the section they don't go to >.< But still, can't tone it down completely! *shakes fist at non-reviewing readers who won't see her fist anyway*
| Reviewed By: Delu On: December 02, 2004 19:02 CST
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WHAT??? I don't understand! No entiendo! Je ne sais pas! WHY ISN'T ANYONE REVIEWING??!! Come on, people...the bad stories get reviews, while this one is lacking them? *cough* anyway, rant over. *straightens shirt* Wonderful chappy, again, of course. Poor Sesshy, his ego must be really bruised at the moment ^_^ And you're capturing the character of Kouga so well...eep, forgive the drool again...^_^" The writing is well done too, grammer wise. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great, but one thing is just a bit wierd it is hard to imagine fluffy as a pervert...hey maybe you could have her call him lord fluffy, instead of lord sesshomaru, just to tick him off.
| Reviewed By: Delu On: November 25, 2004 17:01 CST
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I'm touched, the chapter was for me! *wipes away a tear* Believe it or not, Kouga is my favorite character *goes starry eyed over cute wolf prince* eep, please excuse the drool... Amaya, oh the crafty girl ^_^ Still so good! Would review more, but it's Thanksgiving, and I have to go be with the family ^_^ Looking forward to the next chappy! ^_~
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