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| "Link's Song" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: i think my review is longer than the song....
Reviewed By: Aquachick88 (not logged in) On: November 28, 2004 13:43 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. the jesus reference at the end seemed a bit odd, after all, if anyone at all is "with" Link, it would be Farore since we're talking about a polytheistic society. seems like a cute idea, but it would have been nicer if the format was easier to follow. plus there were some typos that could have easily been taken care of with spellcheck. just stuff to keep in mind for your next shot at this type of thing. ^_^ don't get discouraged though!
| Title: ...Good lord
Reviewed By: OzZ Cometh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 19:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Please try not to take offense, as I am only complying with your beseiging to be reviewed, but this simply didn't come together, at all. The word 'paragraph' certainly comes to mind. Use paragraphs and it will at least be 'coherent' (Doesn't say much for quality, but hey, you take one thing at a time.)
| Title: story and review
Reviewed By: black mage raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought the song was okay. it could be better alot better. but consider this constructive criticism. U can do way better i think if u only try harder. and witht he reviews. U shouldn't be upset cause u don't get reviews. those r the kinda things u should just let come as they please. so yea good luck black mage raven
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