| "Idle Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 23:31 CDT
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yeah err when are you going to post the thir chapter????
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is ever so angsty. You should have a disclaimer on it that says that anyone who is hormonal should not read. Pregnant women shouldnt' read. All in all though I have enjoyed the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 02:40 CDT
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hey i hope its ok with you that i nominated you for best drama. i just feel like this stroy is so great. please keep writing. maybe now more people will see your talent and encourage you to keep on writing too :)
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Reviewed By: Lilia On: April 04, 2005 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear, this is really quite silly.
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 21:31 CST
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yay! you updated!!! and thanks to subtlesarcasm for the shove :) update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mockingbirdflyaway [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 20:01 CST
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Sweet, sad and completely mindblowing. I see talent! Keep going! This is too good not to continue... btw, do you also go by Eartha on ff.net?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: February 03, 2005 15:18 CST
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so sad but so good!
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Reviewed By: kittyfire On: November 21, 2004 21:07 CST
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ok so ive already reviewed but i just wanted to tell you again that this story is great and i realllllllllly hope you continue . :)
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: unmeish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is beautiful and saddening. please continue to write, not many tend to venture on such a path with Inu in this manner and i would love to read more.
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Reviewed By: kittyfire On: November 08, 2004 22:57 CST
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oh my god! that story made me cry! i have never had a story evoke so much emotion from me! you should be very proud of your writing. and if no one else reiviews then they suck and should die but please please please! finish this story if only for my sake. it is so beautiful it deserves to be completed and i truly hope that you will finish. please ! thank you
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 19:37 CST
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omg that was sooo sad but so good. i would like it to continue.
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Reviewed By: Salic On: November 06, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the only fan fic I've cried while reading. Please continue.
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Title: Idle Wishes
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 14:50 CST
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Yes, Continue. Please continue. I really, really would like you to continue. It seems like you're wanting to give Sesshoumaru a chance to break through his problems with Inu Yasha, and Inu Yasha to remember that, as a hanyou, he could live long enough to be reunited with Kagome, and the pup he doesn't know he has. My vote is to continue.
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Reviewed By: Blood Rain On: November 06, 2004 05:15 CST
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Hello. I just wanted to tell you that this is an amazing story so far. It made my heart hurt so bad for inu and kagome. It's well written and deserves to be continued. It's so tragic right now. can't wait to read the next chapter. Please continue and update soon!
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