| "Reality Is Unreal" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: monkeyray9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 09:34 CST
Comment/Review:
great job keep up the good work and update soon! ~@~monkeyray9~@~
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5 it was great. Keep up the good work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4 it was great. Keep up the good work. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Title: =p
Reviewed By: lil_bit_insane [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh ho ho! I see. So HE was the one there, huh? See, my vauge idea was wrong...poor me! Okay! ^_^. But I STILL wanna know about Tala! See now, Kai can be nice...sort of...kind of...maybe. Oh well! I shall await the next chapter! Paitently...very paitently...yup. Sitting...waiting.... LOVE THE STORY!
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Reviewed By: kaibygirl (not logged in) On: November 29, 2004 03:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Very well written, your English is really good, I only saw about 3 mistakes ^_^ You've got a very good plot going, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!! ---kaibygirl---
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Reviewed By: lil_bit_insane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:24 CST
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Tell me who it is...who was behind her? I have a vague clue about who...probably not though. Anyways...is Tala her brother? Hmm.... GREAT STORY! ^-^! Yay! Now I have to wait paitiently again, don't I? *sigh* Oh well, it's worth waiting for!
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Reviewed By: silverfanasy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. I want to hopefully see tala in here. I also want to know if kai and the girl know each other from the past? Could you please convince or aleast try to convince people to upload fics from other sites or make new fics for beyblade. so please continue and update again soon.
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: lil_bit_insane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
You can't stop it there! *.*! Okay...then I will sit here paitiently until you update I suppose...hmmm hmm hmmm........ MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH....sorry...waiting waiting.....
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Title: Hmm....
Reviewed By: lil_bit_insane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
An interesting twist of humur and suspense. Hope you continue! ^_^! Gr8 stori!
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