| "Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Mushipup [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!! can you beleive this is the first time i read this story?? you wrote it ages ago. it was good but i felt like you could of put more life into it. ya know? anywho.....love ya like a sis! see ya in school!!!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 22:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I disagree with Saberwyn, I loved how it ended. raises the questions and gives ideas of more types of crossovers like GW and YYH
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Reviewed By: Saberwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Bloody awesome for most of the fic, but the ending just doesn't feel right to me..
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