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| "Like Sand Through an Hour Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: sisd On: November 22, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off, that was real nice...i mean with the whole gift and stuff...never thought of tohru as a gift...hehehe, but oh well. i've never read any FB fanfic with akito being nice...much less a girl...but apparently that was the spoiler...wow...im shocked...real shocked...how did they bring about her being a girl?....if u cud pls answer soon.... i loved the way you allowed for the sex thing to not be a "big" deal...in terms that to shigure it was juss a game, especially to akito, that was good. the hatori and tohru relationship was sweet and the part with kyoo, yuki, and haru was a bit surprising, but sweet nonetheless...i think though that the whole akito and kureno thing was juss real sweet...i mean how he juss reacted and treated her and stuff.
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Reviewed By: vampyremiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 14:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Congrats Cappy! You've hit the point of my spoiler warning. Chapters 97 and 98 of the manga made some interesting revelations about Akito's character. The confusion is because prior to chapter 97, Akito is known one way while afterward is completely different. It'll make sense once the complete manga is translated into English. Thank you for taking the time to comment. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Cappy On: November 13, 2004 14:17 CST
Comment/Review:
if this is about akito....then it's a HE not SHE unless youre talking about someone else....i'm confused
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