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Reviewed By: QueenFool [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poetic citrus, beautiful, simpliy beautfull! *nod nod*
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Title: angelbaby
Reviewed By: Mediaminer Member On: January 27, 2005 17:17 CST
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Wow....wow....WOW! That was...BEAUTIFULLY written. It was like poetry in the form of...well, sex. I loved it and even if that wasn't the end, I'm satisfied and could end it there. Terrific. But, I mean, if you have more, don't hesitate to come back and continue writing because that was...wow, especially that last chapter. I loved...wow. Wow.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 09:26 CST
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Ah, bliss of the soul outweighing the body's pleasure...so very wonderful... 'And a god bowed before the heavenly glory of their love.' I love this last line. Captures the mood entirely!
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Reviewed By: Dark Wind On: November 30, 2004 15:44 CST
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I adore that last line. Beautifully written. Simply beautiful in itself. *awe*
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Title: Beautiful Chappie
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely beautiful, thats all I got to say I love this fic.
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Reviewed By: Dogmatix On: November 19, 2004 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn that was hot. And Yami's thought process is just.... poor Yami. Very, very perfect juxtaposition between those two factors. *nod*
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 09:51 CST
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Whoa. Hot stuff going down here. I admit, I kind of lifted an eyebrow at this...I always pictured Yami being seme with Yugi...well, whatever, it's a good fic. BTW, regarding the Doom Arc...*wails in grief* but...from what I can gather, Yami has a very strong will to win, and seems willing to do whatever it takes to win. Plus, I think that evil Orichalkos stone around his neck was messing with his mind. Y'know, brainwashing him, tainting his mind, making him think the only way to win was to play that Seal. Anyway, that's my theory. Whatever the case, however, keep writing this story! I love it!
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Title: Great Lemon
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Lemon it was really good, I liked how it flowed in the story. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So . . . . very . . . . beautiful . . . . . . no, no it didn't suck at all.
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Reviewed By: Starduster On: November 12, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Utterly delicious!
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Reviewed By: Dark Wind On: November 11, 2004 11:24 CST
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This was great!!! *grins* A wonderful lemon. You write them so well. This is your second one!?! I can't wait to see what your next one's like! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Motje (unlogged) On: November 11, 2004 04:53 CST
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*thumbs up* That was awesome *drools at her imagination* Sorry, that was the fangirl talking. That was extreme! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh... I've never seen a storyline like this before. *Eyes glitter* I want to see what happens now. *giggles* Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, interesting. While I'd love to see this continue if only for the lemons, I'm still wondering how they got to where they are. Please continue?
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