| "Rebirth and Reincarnation" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 11:04 CDT
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hmmm, 4 years since an update, an interesting concept at least (with a ton of OOC moments) but not a half bad concept at least. If I have time, I'd like to see about reading more, or failing that, writing more to this story. Still, update this crap if you have more, if not, fuck it! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: lanna On: March 14, 2005 19:53 CST
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I love this idea! I haven't seen an idea as good and original as this for a long time! You must finish it! I fell in love with this idea as soon as I saw it! I really hope no one steals this idea. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kaja1234(NLI) On: March 02, 2005 15:29 CST
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cool update!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:22 CST
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omg! update!
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Title: Only 6 reviews?
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should have at least 20 nay a 100! You've managed to capture the characters personalites nicely. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you get more reviews by then. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Surmitra On: November 29, 2004 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God story. I few spelling errors, but will Kurama have Ranmas hold skills back and what will happen if he ever meet his former so called friends and parents. I mean Kurama is nice, sweet cold and polite, but merciless do his enemies and they would count as enemies, mostly Mousse, Ryouga and Akane. Hope he and his demon counterpart will have some fun, maybe his real friends can help him with it.
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Title: Once again....
Reviewed By: Once again.... On: November 29, 2004 00:06 CST
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Once again, I find another fanfiction where the person says Nermia instead of Nerima, and Furiken (or whatever the hell it says)instead of Furinkan. Furiken...HOW THE HELL DO PEOPLE GET THAT? IT DOESN'T REMOTELY EVEN SOUND LIKE FURINKAN, EXCEPT FOR "FURI"! Also, Nermia, isn't even Japanese if you know anyway. A I U E O Ka Ki Ku Ke Ko Ga Gi Gu Ge Go Sa Shi Su Se So Za Ji Zu Ze Zo Ta Chi Tsu Te To Da Ji Zu De Do Na Ni Nu Ne No Ha Hi Fu He Ho Ba Bi Bu Be Bo Pa Pi Pu Pe Po Ma Mi Mu Me Mo Ya I Yu E Yo Ra Ri Ru Re Ro Rya Ri Ryu Re Ryo Wa I U E Wo That is, off the top of my head, the Japanese alphabet. Notice how, using these, it is IMPOSSIBLE to get Nermia out of it. So it HAS TO BE NERIMA! Other then that, good story.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 28, 2004 20:29 CST
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Good chapter
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Reviewed By: DJ On: November 08, 2004 23:01 CST
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Interesting story. I wonder if Ranma will get back all his old skills, including the variants he developed.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 08, 2004 14:04 CST
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Great story so far
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