"Breathing" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Apathetic Empath not logged in On: July 16, 2005 03:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: My God... I'm crying right now. THis was too beautiful. I loved it. Jesus, I can't believe I actually read something as good as this. Veeerrrrry agnsty look at the ed/win relationship, but a very eyeopening and good one all the same. I've never ead anything like this before. Really, really awesome. Great work. A.E.
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Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was wonderful.And like the other reviewers say,this focused on feelings instead of actions.It was great and I enjoyed it very much.Tata!!
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Reviewed By: Katdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 02:55 CDT Comment/Review: It's nice to see something tasteful for a change. Aside from it actually being Winry he's sleeping with, it's more about their feelings than actions. Then to top it off, you pulled it off beautifully. Good job!
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Reviewed By: firedrake220 On: April 18, 2005 20:09 CDT Comment/Review: god i love this. sometimes my reviews don't get through but i hope this one does. this fic is just wonderful. it truly is amazing. deep and detailed, emotional but not sappy. it's a very mature look at love. i adore this.
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Reviewed By: Kuramalvr6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 11:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: different but i still liked it, i hate Winry because of her position but then i realize how incredibly frustrating it must be when ed brakes down and starts crying in her arms...*tears* awww i can take it!!! well any way good job you are a very gifted writer and i hope that you continue to bless this wretched website with your gift!
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Reviewed By: sharingank [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 20:53 CST Comment/Review: That was absolutely beautiful...thank you for this!
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Reviewed By: Sai Orlianna On: January 20, 2005 21:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was soooooooo beautiful!!! ;-; I can't say anythihg else, it was just soooo absolutely wonderful. One of the best I have ever read. ^^
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Reviewed By: kookie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 02:39 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you are an amazing writer! this story is so beautiful. when you wrote about her thinking of him being gone the next day it made my cry... and thats weird because i don't easily cry lol. nice job.
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Title: >.< -good piece Reviewed By: EdwardWongHauPepleuTivruskyIV [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 13:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sorreh about the low score on the enjoyment factor, it was a brilliantly written piece...i've just never personally been into the drama/romance writing, although I do read it from time to rare, occasional time. To empasize the piece the beautiful, flowing, descriptive poem is an excellent addition but it's just the way I am. SO I rated it not on whether I liked or not, but the crediblity of the piece, which was excellent, there is no doubt about that. And, thus speaking, I apologize sincerely for the low enjoyment factor rating.
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Title: Sweet, touching Reviewed By: Yamisbabygirl64 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 18:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my gosh, this sotry is so sweet. Ed and WInry. So touching! *sniff* The poem is so touching of how the sotry goes. I just tink it's so touching where they talked about memeoirs. It was sweet. Hope u write more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rageful Jewel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 16:53 CST Comment/Review: This was beautifully written. I wasn't aware that you also wrote FMA fics. Then again, I just started to watch the series on CN. But from what I know of your writing skill (from reading your WHR fics) you appear to have kept the characters in character. It was very insightful. Adios. PS: I'm Joya Oscura from Harry's.
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Reviewed By: michikoneko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 18:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved it!!!! Was cute! Good job!
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