| "Headlong Into Folly" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Divanora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::FLAIL:: Absolutely amazing. Read it twice. I just love reactions Yohji has. Would love to see it from Aya's view too...::hint hint:: and I agree with the other reviewer who asked about Omi/Ken's reaction :-p Just a quick comment though - some of the words got run together, most likely MM's fault :-p but thought you should know.
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Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 15:52 CST
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*hums "Like a virgin"* Aya, seme and badass... Kyaaaaaah!!!! *dies from nosebleed*.......... Next to Nari's corpse, the police found a note: "Killed by a fanfic..." ;-) See other reviews. In-fucking-credible.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely marvelous. I think this is my third time reading this fic. I love it: -Yohji's creative evasions of the topic of his virginity were charming and human, and I loved Aya's persistence here -Yohji's conflict between very natural fear and his desire for Aya -Aya's intensity and tenderness were really well expressed Hrm.. It all sounds kind of trite when I try to write it out, but marvelous fic!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Sorry, I'm inarticulate right now, but--wow!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 07:56 CDT
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hmm love this fic...i love how you keep the guys in character; Aya especially: Cold, dominating presence even in sex. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm I seem to be on a rampage of reading through your stuff. You're an awesome writer, though I have stated this before, and I love reading your works. The emotions are good, the characters are pretty true to form and all of it just seems to fit well together. Your "flow" is beautiful and in honesty, I really don't have any room to complain about anything. Other than the fact that you don't have more. Moving along, with this story in particular I really really would have loved to see Omi and Ken's reactions to their older teammates' decision. In fact, I would have loved to see how Aya explained it to them, or if he explained it at all. *chuckles* Really, it makes me wish you had done a pwp series for this to go along with but I'll be grateful that there is this what there is and be done with it. Seriously, I wonder why you do not have more reviews. People are so strange. Anyway, by all means... continue with writing. For now, I'm off to read some of your other stuff because, as it turns out, you write for several of my favorite series/movies. ^__^ Please keep the awesome work and I'll be lingering around as a fan. -VL
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 22:43 CST
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Oh, so well done... better than my lemons for sure! *jealous* Well, now I have something to aspire to, ne? I always thought they deserved to be rough and tumble... and with Aya so dominating? Fantastic! Keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: Tana_Dairyu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chances are, if I was more girly, I'd be sqeeling my brains out, as it is... I've just got a huge hentai grin on my face. XD Anywho, loved the fic, and I hope to read more. ^_^ Keep it up.
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Title: This was f#%@ing awesome!!!
Reviewed By: seven7 On: November 08, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!! This is such a great story!! Will there be a sequel?! I love Yohji uke and Aya possessive I love it!!
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Reviewed By: dita_chan On: November 08, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! looking forward to read your next fic!
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