| "Project 14" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Can't wait for the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good beginning, it would be nice if you updated more
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 07:08 CST
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Reviewed By: Scruffy Puppy On: November 08, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has real potential as far great B/V fics go in my book. It's a new spin on my favourite couple and I think most of it is well written and thought out. There's only one little glitch that made me go "huh" when I read it and that's how in the world Bulma would have the ability to lift Vegeta's dead weight. I have an eight year old cousin weighing in at about 70 lbs and I have trouble hefting him. Given the fact that muscle weighs quite a lot, I always figured that a fully grown Saiyan male would weigh at least three times that which would make it pretty much impossible for a normal woman to move an unconscious Veggie, let alone carry him. Other than that, great job and I'll be looking out for updates in the future ^_~
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Reviewed By: Avier On: November 08, 2004 05:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the concept behind this one. I do believe I shall be watching out for updates for this :P Its a direction I haven't come across before, so go originality. Only thing that sticks out, is the part where Bulma puts vegeta over her shoulder and carries him home... Has she become super strong recently? Aside from that bit, it all looks really clean and well put together!
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