| "Saiyan Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kinbix and bania On: February 11, 2013 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...god... I WANT ONE OF THOSE @&$#%~¤ machines!!! God I could have sooooooo much fun with that thing!!!!!!!(pantie change!) You should make another chappie for your fans.(cute anime eyes) please mistress!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 07:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Now this is my kind of fic. Very sweet or salty in this case ^_^ I'm a Trunks girl all the way, but I can't say I haven't thought about Vejita. This fic is so Yummy. I hope you write more chapters soon.
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Title: Saiyan Lust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 03:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: JEANNA On: June 12, 2005 15:40 EDT
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LORD WOMAN I DIED AND Went to HEAVEN update before i HURT U LOL KIDDING GETA BABY SOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT OH I NEED A DAMN SHOWER
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 04:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god... this... fic... is... AWESOME... So deliciously raunchy... all those cum shots... *faints like a Southern belle* Sometimes you just want to read about some nasty SEX, who cares about an intricate plot. I commend you: usually I run screaming the other way when people pair OCs with the characters, but this one worked perfectly. She's so nebulous- no name, just an 'I', which allows the reader to insert themselves or whoever they want into her character. The tongue-in-cheek premise of a mind machine to make them real, and things like the "panting like a bitch in heat" are great humorous touches that allow me to accept the implausible pwp lemons. You had some spelling, word usage, and tense errors, but none so much that they ruined the story for me. I'm not fond of bdsm so I preferred ch 1 and 2, but heck, I even enjoyed 3 quite a bit since the sadism wasn't too bad. I was thrilled to see you'd updated. It was just a great sex-fest overall, and I loved how everything turned out. A ch 4? Sure, why not, if you feel like it. But leaving it here would be fine too. It was a great read (actually I've read it several times).Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Hentai-yaro On: June 05, 2005 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Invite bulma or chi-chi into the next chapter Make it more interesting ^_~
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Reviewed By: nekokitsune On: December 08, 2004 21:37 EST
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THAT WAS SOOOOO F***ING HOT!!! UPDATE SOON! Great fic!
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Title: Bathroom fun!
Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 02:27 EST
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This was soooooo good! The best of all worlds in one session. Oooh, I envy your hentainess! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Jeanna On: December 07, 2004 19:45 EST
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THIS JUST KEEP TO GET BETTER AND BETTER!!!!! IN THE SHOWER WITH GETA POOH!!!!!!! GAHD!! I NEED A PANTY CHANGE!!!!! EVIL EVIL WHAWILL PAYBAY BE HUH? DOMINACE OVER MY GETA POOHH???! HURRY UP IM DYING HERE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 02:52 EST
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0.0 well don't hog them all for yourself! greedy woman...
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Reviewed By: JEANNA On: November 11, 2004 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE I NEED THAT HAT!!!!!!! GODDAMNIT!!! GIVE ME GIVE ME!!!! LOL UPDATE DAMN IT IM DYING HERE !!! FUCKING FANTASTIC LOL YUMYUM!!!! VEGETA , TRUNKS AND GOKU (DROOLS .......Panty change ) BAD AUTHOR BAD !!!!!!! HURRY WITH THE UPDATE I LOVE THIS FIC!
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Title: mediaminer member
Reviewed By: mesha On: November 11, 2004 16:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That shit was the shit.hell if i had one i think i'd lose it.but please continue. nomatter what. bring on the sayians.yeaaaaaa.Now who exactly am i yelling to.If you ever need help let me know.kyotoeve@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 11:29 EST
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Scary! God, I want one of those machines. Can't wait for an update!
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