| "A Lonely Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Title: A Lonely Wish
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: September 17, 2005 09:06 CDT
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you know you got a really hot fic, the only part i dont like is vegeta raping pan.. other wise i like it... ok main reason i dont like vegeta raping her is cause he is my favorite character.. ah vegeta!!! anyway i hope you update soon. i cant wait for more!! good luck may kami-sama be with you
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Reviewed By: Me On: September 03, 2005 14:53 CDT
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BOUT FUCKING TIME! WOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YEAH! LOVED IT! update again...I mean again, dont leave me hanging like last time!!!!!!!!!
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Title: A Lonely Wish
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Me in the middle On: August 28, 2005 13:47 CDT
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UPDATE!!! FOR FUCK SAKE!!
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Title: A Lonely Wish
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 16:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: de blah
Reviewed By: Me!!! On: May 10, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! Where are you? I WANT AN UPDATE! Its been ages since the last one!!! Come on! Get with the DBZ porn!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bighu On: April 10, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good. keep doing pan. id write more but thats your job.
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai99 On: February 19, 2005 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Damn, that was...wow...MORE SMUT PLEASE!!!
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Title: Dude
Reviewed By: Lazy-git-who-cant-be-bothered-to-get-account On: February 16, 2005 09:40 CST
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Mah, people feel embarassed bout reviewing porn... I'm not! Fucking hell! Pan getting a lot, no? Horny lil bitch... Update gain soon! Loved this chapter...WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Lazy-git-who-cant-be-bothered-to-get-account On: February 05, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice way of turning extreme porn into an actual story! Trust me, i've read some fics with all sex, not plot. Hate those ones... But me likey ur fic...one problem tho... U HAVENT UPDATED! No worries, just post another chapter, asap and i'll be happy ^_~ Adios! ps UPDATE QUICKLY!
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Title: A Lonely Wish
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 17:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: A Lonely Wish
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Man this fic is the shit. It's like free porn and you're not supposed to watch it but you watch it antway. I wanna see more of this DBZ porno fiction.
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Reviewed By: katsura-sama On: November 21, 2004 15:42 CST
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i like this please update soon i want to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 10:21 CST
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Oh, I love this story...Please update with more lemony goodness soon! I want to know who this "Brolli" is...
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Reviewed By: ryshui [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 20:00 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great so far...when you going to finish?
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Reviewed By: Atarah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehe, Brolli sure is popular! *snicker* Whats Everyone gonna think when they find out that Pan toy wants to kill her Grandpa? *another snicker*
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Reviewed By: Scruffy Puppy On: November 10, 2004 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If anything, this is most definitely original. The only criticism I have is that the Trunks / Bra incest was a little unexpected. Maybe you could put up a warning or something so people don't have any misgivings about what they're gonna be reading - always a good way to avoid getting flamed. The Pan / Brolli pairing is one I've never seen before though and I gotta admit I'm intrigued. Plus it's always nice to find a story by someone who actually paid attention in high school English ^_~ This is an interesting start and I'll definitely be looking out for future updates. Please keep writing!
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