| "Weekend Warriors" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ all i can do is freakin smile! yummy sexyness and fluff!! i love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Icicle Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yummy!!! i LOVE this fic!!! ^-^ its REALLY REALLY good...^-^ and yummy! ^-^ great job with it! ~Eda~
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Title: Ch.3
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 06:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, a sexy beautiful ending. Very good! Loved it! I hope u will be writing more Dee and Ryo fics in the future. Awesome job with this one!!!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Aye!! The sexiness!! I LOVE THIS FIC!! lol Loved this chappie! Dee and Ryo are so hott!!! Can't wait for the next one!! Pwease update soon!!!
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Title: gods!
Reviewed By: kitty in the box On: February 08, 2005 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GODS! I LOVE THIS FIC!
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 19:04 CST
Comment/Review:
It was cute!! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Casey Williams On: November 25, 2004 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Excellent- your dialogue's so natural and I like how you characterize Ryo- there are so many people who make him a total prude, it's nice to read something like this.
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Title: Kate
Reviewed By: Kate09190 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's awesome!! You have to continue this. I dunno though, they probably should wait till they get home...but then again..... ~.^ Sorry it would be signed but I'm too lazy to sign in. In the begining though, I really thought that they were in an actual shoot out, scared me for a sec.
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sexy! I love it! Bwt either car or bedroom sound good. Or if u can't decide, how about both? Have them do it in the car and then when they get home they take a shower and...*mind trails off thinking of hott Dee and Ryo sex* Well u can only imagine! ^_~ But great story! Very well done! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 18:06 CST
Comment/Review:
The opening was very well done. You really had me fooled as far as thinking that they were in a shot out. I hope you write the lemon as well as you wrote the begining. //_^
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: November 09, 2004 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah, go for it. Seems like you're off to a good start with this fanfic. I love a juicy lemon scene!!!!!!!! If you write it I'll be sure to read it.
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Title: Good ^__^
Reviewed By: Serpentseyes On: November 09, 2004 13:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh Heh. Nice little fic you got there. Good spelling and grammar. And please write a little follow-behind chappie! I mean lemon.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Sekushi On: November 09, 2004 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, really original. I like how you made the reader feel like the boys are in a shoot out. This sounded like Dee was talking, but it's no biggie. //Dee looked to Ryo. "Ah, I'm beat you guys. But go ahead if you wanna play another game without me." Dee shook his head. "Nah, I'm with Ryo on this one. I think we're gonna head back home." /// You must continue. And hmmm... i vote for the car.
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