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| "New Horizons" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: gohanstrife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thing I hate more than ... well actually, the only thing I hate in your story is the paragraphs. Split them up when a different person talks. It'll make the story seem MUCH longer, yes, but I'm dyslexic o.x My eyes are like @_@ when I'm trying to read from one character to another... it takes me a while, cause I get confused on whose talking, and when that happens, letters start looking sdrawkcab, or just plain miped ux, you know? o_O Other than that, awsome story! Hehe... seriously, your chapters are so freak'n long o.x I hope you're contining this story, I'm very curious to how the Joker played out in the past, and how this relationship between Raven, Star, and Robin will also unfold. Update... now I gotta go update my crap o.x;
| Reviewed By: mouserr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the input OzZ, I haven't gotten the proofed copy back from the beta readers as yet so please bear with and excuse the typos/grammatical errors. This is will be replaced with the final copy as soon as I get it. Im working on the 2nd chapter now and hope to have it out soon though Im also working on some graphics that need to be finished, gotta love freelance work.*sarcasm* Once I've finished them I'll be able to work on the 3d stuff I plan to do for this story.
| Title: Neat
Reviewed By: OzZ Cometh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 15:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, at the present moment, I haven't the time to read the full extent of the fic, but I can say that what I'm seeing now is some pretty good stuff. A few things, though, try to use italics when coveying thoughts, try to use commas (as a number of them never quite got there) and remember to space between paragraphs. These things do nothing to help quality (save possibly the italics) But they make the fic more organized. Aside from that, you're doing fine.
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