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| "Whenever, Wherever" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! YOUR A VERY GOOD WRITEER! FEEL FREE TO RTURN THE FAVOR ON MY FICS IF YA LIKE! TILL THEN ~JA NE!~
| Title: From Chibi-Suiko
Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only gotten up to chapter three, but I like what I see, pretty much. I know that I've read this before, and you've got the characters well-based, and even though the plots been used a lot, I like the drama you've added into it; especially the part at the end of chapter three when Ash was trying to word it the best how badly ill he was to his mother... That one just tore me up. Anyway, I'll come back some other time to read this a bit more, but, if you're an AAMR fan, could you check out my work? --Chibi--
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