| "His Woman" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: moved
Reviewed By: indigo_twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....for some reason...ur fanfics move me to tears.....this one....well it killed me, ur portray on how Koga would react on a situation like this is exactly how I would imagine it.He's not as strong as he says he is, and in a way his just a child, he just wants love. And I know alot of ppl will give u shit for making kagome like that.....but it's true. Kagome really is Dependent on her friends, If they die...she WOULD be a shell of a human.......ur a writing genius!
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Title: moved
Reviewed By: Indigo_Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....for some reason...ur fanfics move me to tears.....this one....well it killed me, ur portray on how Koga would react on a situation like this is exactly how I would imagine it.He's not as strong as he says he is, and in a way his just a child, he just wants love. And I know alot of ppl will give u shit for making kagome like that.....but it's true. Kagome really is Dependent on her friends, If they die...she WOULD be a shell of a human.......ur a writing genius!
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Title: This wasn't as good as the others
Reviewed By: Bonshie On: January 17, 2006 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seemed really....wrong. Like Kagome was some sort of lovesick weakling! And was it narated by kouga or something? it seemed like nothing was said from kagome's perception...i must say it was original, but i don't see anything that would make me read future chapters of this story. It just doesn't really make people want to read the details(or me wdver). i find myself skipping through the overly mushy parts. So not right.
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Reviewed By: hiei and the cherry On: December 11, 2005 12:04 CST
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that authors note suddenly brings the whole thing to a new level...it makes sense now! ^^;; angsty, yes...but still awesomely written!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: TheeBycth On: July 23, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sad!!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
put alot of thought into your little theory have you? I find it very very intreging, when your done with Possession I hope you write something longer to explore it more deeply...I think its a fantastic idea, you could change the whole story line...wow
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Title: correction.
Reviewed By: Ashiki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 19:40 CST
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I wouldn't wish such a horrific thing on my worst enemy.
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Reviewed By: Ashiki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, This piece was just so fucking sad. I actually started crying when it seemed like Kagome was dead right along with everyone else. Not because I was sad that she was dead, I personally don't really like Kagome for some reason that is as unknown to me as it is to the rest of the world. I was sad for Koga because he truly loved Kagome and having thought he lost her nearly killed him, and THAT nearly killed me. I love Koga and I'd never want anything like this to happen to him. I can only hope I ,ever, have someone like Koga who loves me so deeply, so truly and purely, that they would be strong enough to take my life if I truly wished them too. To think Koga FINALLY had Kagome and she was just an empty shell by the time he got to her. Such a thing should never happen to anyone. I would wish such a horrific thing on my worst enemy. .Ashiki. ( a very SAD .Ashiki. )
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 18:28 CST
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wow.. that was really sad. =/ I felt like Kagome did for almost a year of my past too. it makes me glad that kouga ended it.. im glad he was strong enough. almost wish i had someone to do that for me..
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Utterly Tragic. Interesting insight on Kouga's point-of-view. Also a unique plot. Time Loops. Temporal Mechanics. Can't say much more than, wonderfully done.
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Reviewed By: pazazz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 14:54 CST
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Very sad, but an excellent twist. I could not help getting caught up in this story. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Meres On: November 09, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the saddest damn thing I've ever read. Excellently written.
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