| "Then came an angel" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Only one complaint
Reviewed By: Koichi On: September 25, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do know that guns are illegal in Japan, right? Sammy would have been arrested for firing off three rounds. Other than that, it was good.
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Title: XDXDXD
Reviewed By: Koichi On: August 10, 2005 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too bad 10 is as high as those ratings go. You have my personality down, Sapu-chan! [hugs]
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Reviewed By: Koichi On: June 17, 2005 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, gods. I enjoyed that! You've got me down pretty well. ^^ The whole bit with me and Kenda-chan talking about how Seishirou and I are both blind in the right eye was great! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Lusitania On: April 16, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh. Another Mary Sue.
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Title: Ack
Reviewed By: Koichi On: December 10, 2004 11:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Would have read the new chapters earlier, but I have a senior paper to write. Then again, the thesis is on fanfiction, so why not read a fanfic while working on the stupid thing? Anyway. Cool idea, making Kendalina a shinigami. Interesting concept. I remember reading the books with Ken in them but I can't for the life of me remember any of the titles. Can you give me some help there?
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