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| "LET'S GO TO WELFARE SCHOOL!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: WHOOOOO
Reviewed By: SIDEBO J On: November 17, 2004 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ILOVEIT!!! WHOOOOO!!! THIS IS MY FIRST STORY DEBUT!!!So anyway I noticed in one spot where Britt says something you forgot one of those ":" thingies. And you have some spelling mistakes. Just explaining why I gave you a "9" for spelling and grammar.KEEP, KEEP, KEEP IT GOIN'! KEEP, KEEP, KEEP IT GOIN'!!!Thought I'd add some color.=P~JENNY
| Title: ola
Reviewed By: SilverkitsuneRyoku(aka J) On: November 11, 2004 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a very funny story. Please continue. If you added two random reviewers, excluding me, I bet you could get a lot of reviewers. Very random. Wonderful job and can you at least tell Hiei that Ryoku says hi. He will know who you are talking about scince he hates me so I love him
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