| "Time for annoying characters to die!" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Not Sesshy-kun!!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 17:31 CST
Comment/Review:
You cannot kill Sesshomaru!!! That almost every fangirl's favorite character in the history of Inuyasha!! Also,in Yugioh,kill Anzu Masaki and Pegasus because they are both annoying! In Inuyasha,kill Kikyo. In Yu Yu Hakusho,kill Botan and her pekiness. Oh,well,it's your story anyway and it's your ideas too. Update.
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Title: FLUFFY!!!
Reviewed By: Tigeress Demon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
NO! YOU CAN'T KILL FLUFFY! YOU CAN'T! YOU JUST CAN'T! I WILL KILL YOU MYSELF IF YOU EVEN TOUCH A HAIR ON HIS PRETTY LITTLE HEAD! *takes out Millennium Bow and Arrows* Now take that back or suffer the consquences! Nah...I'm just kidding. Do what you wish. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! And please kill off Kaede! I hate that old woman! Bugs the hell outta me!! lol. Anyway, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 01:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Inuyahsa: Everyone (I don't like the show) Yu-Gi-Oh!: Everyone but Pegasus, Raphael, Alistair, Dartz and Yami Bakura (Everyone else is gay) Yu Yu Hakusho: Dr. "The Fag" Ichigaki (He's the only one that annoys me)
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 01:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Inuyahsa: Everyone (I don't like the show) Yu-Gi-Oh!: Everyone but Pegasus, Raphael, Alistair, Dartz and Yami Bakura (Everyone else is gay) Yu Yu Hakusho: Dr. "The Fag" Ichigaki (He's the only one that annoys me)
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU KILLED KUWABARA!!!!! >:(
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Title: lol!
Reviewed By: Xezinty On: December 07, 2004 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah! That is so awesome! Make sur t 2 kill Fluffy slowly 4 me... *twitch twitch* Have fun killing ppl!!! ^0^
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Name:Kikyo(Inuyasha) name:Anzu Mazaki(Yugioh) and name:Keiko Yukimura and Botan (Yu Yu Hakusho). You can kill them for all I care because they annoy the heck out of me!
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Reviewed By: queen spunklesparkle of wonderland On: November 17, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yes,yes....very good, but can you pleez kill off kagome from inuyasha? do that and i will give you and enjoyment factor and over all rating....pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....she annoys the ......stuffing out of me and my life would be better if you did that
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Reviewed By: Realdrawer80 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh that just tears it. Togashi and the other manga artists should ban fanfiction for good.
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Reviewed By: babitoki On: November 13, 2004 22:56 CST
Comment/Review:
name: Anzu Mazaki name: honda Hiroto Show: Ygo Can you kill them off please? they really tick me off
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: November 13, 2004 09:28 CST
Comment/Review:
THIS IS AWESOME!Write more soon,and have a Youko plushie*gives you Youko plushie*Later!
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah. I forgot to mention this. A new paragraph should start each time a different person speaks, and I think there should be more adjectives.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, two things just looking at it. You should seperate paragraphs, so that it's easier to read and makes more sense. Second, I dare say you didn't mean for the chapter to be written twice... One for the actual chapter and one for the summary.
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