"White-Eyed Shamans" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: VenusIsKnownForFlyTraps [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 18:06 CST Comment/Review: You need to update this. Oh, and I saw that teaser thingy--you should add that as the next chapter or something.
| Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 22:47 CST Comment/Review: Pretty good. I like your writing and very creative. Nice start. Be a bit more discrptive in the dream sequence tho (ya that would be nice^_^) longer chapters would be nice since your story is so good, don't short change yourself or your readers. Thank you!!! Love Ya -Rabid P.S. Love hinata fics and I can hope for romance in the future. (I hope*_*)
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