| "An Angel's Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Please update
Reviewed By: Mistress_of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update yjis fanfic.
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Reviewed By: cesca On: April 18, 2005 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... good fic! but just fix these problems: tae: tea it was really annoying whenever i saw it. just use spell-checker once in a while too. otherwise do continue!
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Reviewed By: Soujifan On: December 12, 2004 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one! I would say the whole idea took me by surprise. I have never read a OC paired up with Souji before. Souji is my favourite character of all times! And I like the way you portray Naomi. She looks like her father. I noticed a slight typo mistake in your fic. Nothing much to worry about, though. Another thing, I find it a little weird to see Hijikata and Naomi hugging each other. Japanese at those times are very different, they don't do that. But hey, this is your story.. So, just forget those shits I've said. Overall, a good read! Love to read more! Looking forward to your updates!
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