Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should give your story more detail. You're on the right track and everything. Also, look out for your grammar, some of it is kind of confusing. Flush out the story, giving more detail about what the characters are feeling and thinking. But I like it so far please continue your work.
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