| "All the truth is on the table" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: xPiiShPooSh On: January 09, 2007 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh! I LOVE ZoroxSanji fanfictions that are sweet, funny, and intimate, and yours is the best I've read so far! Yummy and amazing~ The only part I didn't really like was Luffy. How he kept on sticking in. Even with his kind of personality, I think that he wouldn't have done any of the things, except for the little part in the end. Zoro was quite OOC, but I think that it fit really nicely! Overall, I really love this fanfiction, and I'm sorry that you got bad reviews on it.
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Reviewed By: Miss-Skitchiez On: January 05, 2007 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... =o.o= Now, I am not really a ZoSan kind of fangirl but... Hoshit. o///o That was friggin awesome. I'm a ZoLu fangirl through and through, but ZoSan comes in a close second for me. Now I've read a LOT of fics, most more descriptive with the sex scenes than this is, and barely batted an eye. This story made me turn red. Bright red. >__> The way it is written is amazing, hardly any grammar or spelling errors at all. Your ability at capturing personalities is something to be greatly respected. The way you made the Yaoi seem like a real type thing. Like a true look. Not just that they did it and it was great and they will always love each other 'cause of one sex moment. Also, the deal with Sanji's eye? Really makes you wonder. I mean, I always see him fighting and he is so kickass, then suddenly he is taken by surprise and is down on the ground. Seriously makes you wonder what's up with his eye. I applaud you. If this story is still a WIP and there is another chapter then you can surely expect another review from me. You may consider that bad though. I dunno. I tend to leave awesome stories with long ass reviews/rants. It just seems a bit crappy to read something like this and only give you a 'Good job, keep it up.'
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 03:14 CDT
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ha, i knew someone else i liked had done a one piece fic. so few fanfic writers have the fortitude to tackle the sometimes harsh realities of anal sex--any kind of sex, really. just reading this made my intestines hurt. heh, so far (as far as i know) you've written sanzo, aya and sanji raped in the most heinous ways, and i can't get enough of it. that really didn't sound right... anyway, i loved luffy's zen-like taking in stride of everything, reminding zoro he's available. poor zoro, the big lummox...he was so sweet in this. i want a zoro to sleep on...this was really great to read.
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 13:42 CDT
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Holy Crap, you got bad reviews on this?! I'm at a loss, your writing is excellent. I really appreciated the realism of it, most yaoi writers seem to make their sex scenes painfully cliche. I hadn't realized just how long this was when I started reading but then I couldn't rip myself away....
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Title: Kudos
Reviewed By: Janeth Rhian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderfully written story! This fan fic hit home with many good ideas about both characters. A very touching and well-rounded story.
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Reviewed By: Neechi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applause* Yay! ^_^ Sanji and Zoro are the only reasons I know anything about One Piece; and before I figured out the names *cough-took-the-T.V.-off-mute-cough* I called Sanji "Curly-Eyes" and Zoro "Green-Head"; both in completely innocent ways. O_o (That really didn't have a point to it; I figured you might want something a little random to read, so I wrote it.)
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Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh! this one loves this fic very much and you must be updating soon my friend!
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Reviewed By: ProphetessOfVice On: August 11, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: July 18, 2005 14:15 CDT
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you updated it! i'm thrilled. this has to be one of my favorite one piece fanfictions. you do such an excellent job on the characterization, the detail...and the lemon too. This chapter was an awesome read...sanji not knowing it could be done without bleeding quite poignant. Great work, sorry some reviewers are being jerks...
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Reviewed By: Alora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick ass peice of art! I just wish there was more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yaoi Neko On: July 14, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last, updated! *sighs happily* I think that ur fic is brilliant. Love the original ideas that you have. Keep it up! More Zoro/Sanji yaoi goodness!!! *begin to sink in drool*
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Reviewed By: Arhetoske [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray for the return of the gher! The ficcage was great, as are all your fics. If only the rating went up to 100, cause you'd get it every time. This update was just what I needed after work. I have to sleep now or I'd keep gushing forever XD
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 31, 2005 13:59 CST
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(purrs) ooh, i liked that. why do you call it pwp? there was a lot in there..almost a character piece. i'd like to see more of this sort by you... (ponders) mm, maybe sanji doing the comforting after zoro accidentally eats the neko-neko fruit and looks a bit...catty? lol regardless, nice job.
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 03:40 CST
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good story. I really liked the whole Zoro and Sanji thing going on.
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Reviewed By: Arhetoske [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 12:42 CST
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Great story, really entertaining. Since it was my first One Piece fic, I liked the characterizations, it was like reading suddenly NC17-rated One Piece.
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