| "The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Hige the Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorite but it all should be either in the first person or third, not both, you should make more like this
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Title: Lily Tsukino
Reviewed By: Lily Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good for a first timer....no real plot tho....but okay i guess
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Title: Lily Tsukino
Reviewed By: Lily Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good for a first timer....no real plot tho....but okay i guess
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Title: ehh
Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
no this isn't a flame, it's some helpful encouragement: make your hentai fics a little more detailed. but it was okay...
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