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| "Yugi meets the Saber Dolls" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: My opinion on this fanfic VII
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 15:58 CDT
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So, you just got back from Orlando, ne? I went there when I was about 8 or 9. I just got back from Las Vegas the week before last, in celebration of my 21st birthday! Anyway, Chapter 22. Huh...you said that Tiger would "get her way with Yugi" in this chapter. What did you mean by that? Looks like time may be running out for her, since Faust is in the YGO dimension, and Tiger might regain her memories! Will she and the other two Saber Dolls go back with Faust, or will they remain with Yugi and go to Disney World? Now I really can't wait to find out! Hurry up with Chapter 23! (^_^)
| Title: Unholiest of Reviewers!
Reviewed By: Alexander the Unholy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! So good i had to begin my own lemon version! Please, Grace my lemony mock up with your review DJ-san!
| Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the outsiders On: August 03, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea with ishizu getting middle of it i think yugi would be safe with her but saber dolls might not like it but i think pretty good idea.please making some more chapters with yugi/ishizu. please and thank you your friend, dale ray cameronii
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic VI
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 12:39 CDT
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Chapter 21...Well, I suppose that Bakura's manuevers in combat were okay, although I really can't see him with a monster such as King Dragun. So, you're planning on bring Faust into the story, and having him side with Dartz? And what exactly do you mean by Ishizu getting caught in the "catfight crossfire"? Is _she_ going to fall for Yugi, too? Well, I can't wait to see what happens next! (^_^)
| Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: July 07, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yugi and saber dolls fun is always ruined but i think they handle it now as for tiger get her way with yugi i think can handle her no promblem but panther and lynx gets going better. your friend, dale ray cameronii
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic V
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:00 CDT
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Chapter 20...Well, there's not really much I can say about this chapter, all that happens is a bunch of living Duel Monsters clashing with other living Duel Monsters. Since the "Waking the Dragons" storyline has already ended on TV, I'm not really that interested in it anymore. However, I am looking forward to seeing how this fic ends. Will the Saber Dolls remain with Yugi forever, resulting in an eternally-jealous Téa? Will Katrina remain with Joey forever, resulting in an eternally-jealous Mai? If the Saber Dolls leave, will they somehow be sent back to their own time? Anyways, I just want to notify you all that the first chapter of my YGO/SMJ Lemon is up! Read & Review, please! (^_^)
| Title: yugi meets the saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: May 24, 2005 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fanfiction with yugi and saber dolls yugi/lynx and yugi/tiger and yugi/panther all three saber dolls and full lemon with yugi/isis ishtar. please and thank you dale ray cameronii
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic IV
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:19 CDT
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Okay, here's my opinion on Chapters 17-19... Well, you kind of had a lemon scene between Yugi and Luchs/Lynx in Chapter 17 (I mean, she obviously had an orgasm from Yugi's breastplay). And in Chapter 18, I thought for a second that Yugi was going to give sexual pleasure to Tiger and Panther, but he didn't. And as for Chapter 19, I kind of felt that the scene where every single YGO character showed up to help defeat Fartz--gomen--Dartz was sort of...well...kind of cheesy, for lack of a better word. Granted, the "Great Leviathan" is some sort of all-powerful dragon creature, but come on! One of my most favorite elements of this fic is the firey jealously and white-hot rage exhibited by Téa and Rebecca at how the Saber Dolls are stealing Yugi away from them. I've always seen Téa as one of the strongest YGO characters, quite possibly possessing the potential to hold her own against Yugi or Kaiba in a game of Duel Monsters. I especially liked the scenes where she and Rebecca stood up against the Saber Dolls in pillow fights, even though they lost. (Téa-chan gets an "A" for effort). And the scene where Téa destroys that metal door with her bare hands was just...fuckin' A (^_^). Anyways, I'm getting close to finishing the first chapter of my Yu-Gi-Oh!/Saber Marionette J/???????? Lemon Crossover FanFic! I hope to have it up sometime next week! TTFN! (^_^)
| Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: May 12, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fanfiction.please making some more chapters and little yugi and all three saber dolls a lemon chapter with yugi lynx tiger panther it very good idea please and thank you. your friend dale ray cameronii
| Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 13:27 CDT
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Ay-yi-freakin'-YI! Do you NOT like Dartz or what? Yugi had to call out the big guns this time. You should've wrote that season man.
| Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword On: April 23, 2005 11:13 CDT
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A very good chapter. You might want to have Katrina have the Light fairy effect monster Guardian Angel Joan. Also a good magic card to have is Ekibyo Drakmord, which stops a card from attacking and destroys it in two turns. A good magic card for Yugi is Contract with the Abyss and Des Koala, which inflicts 400 pts of Direct damage x how many monsters in the field. Another good card to add to Yugi's deck is Miracle Restoring, which allows him to draw either the Dark Magician or Buster Blader. Also, the dark and light magicians are low level magicians that can special summon DM and BB to the field to get the Dark Paladin out. That's all I can think of for Katrina and Yugi. If you need any more help, you know where to find me!
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic III
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 14:48 CDT
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OOPS! I reviewed Chapter 14 last Friday without checking for any new chapters! How embarrassing! Anyway, here's my opinion on Chapters 15 and 16... Wow. Joey defeated Rex. The crowd goes wild. Yay. Goddammit, Dartz! Why didn't you let Mai finish off that stupid Texan hick Katrina?! I didn't really give a flip about the Yugi vs. Weevil Duel (okay, maybe a little), but I really wanted to see Katrina's soul devoured by the Orichalcos! I hope they have a rematch soon, and that Mai kicks her redneck ass, and hooks up with Joey! I don't really care about the Joey+Mai pairing, but it's better that having Joey pair up with your irritating Original Character! As for your question at the end of Chapter 16, here's my answer, me being a male: I'd shun them, in favor of my dream goddess Téa Gardner! I'd take sexy-cute over sexy-"busty lusty" any day! (^_^) Besides, I'm quite the advocate of the Yugi+Téa pairing. I even wrote a lemon scene with them in my "Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji!" fanfic series, with more to come in the future! (^_^) And as for my YGO/SMJ lemon, which'll be a prequel to the aforementioned "Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji!" I shall leave you on that paradox. Until next time...
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic II
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 15:26 CDT
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Dammit, you dopey dumbasses of Doom (Heh heh, I love alliteration)! How could you lose to the Saber Dolls?! You suck as Anime villians! *sigh* It's pretty obvious that Joey's going to defeat Rex, and Yugi's going to do the same to Weevil, but I have a feeling that that annoying dipshit redneck Katrina's going to triumph over Mai! Please have Mai win, and have Joey pair up with her, or else I'll be very upset! DOWN WITH THE REDNECK BITCH! Anyway, I hope to have the first chapter of my YGO/SMJ lemon fic up in about 1-2 months (I'm quite busy with my other fics). As for the other crossover, I'm keeping it a secret for now! Ciao!(^_^)
| Reviewed By: dragonandsword On: April 01, 2005 23:47 CST
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I must admit that these last chapters of yours are good. Especially the special dragon that Joey had. It's a shame that he doesn't have that in the show. Anyways, I also like the Katrina/Joey coupling and the fact that Mai is in denial at the end of this chapter. All in all, another good set my man!
| Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 11:32 CST
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About your challenge, I'm willing to go for it. Also I'm working on some new stories and was wondering if you would review them for me.
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