| "Yugi meets the Saber Dolls" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: nobody-tuochs-mai
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: April 01, 2008 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah i wish yugi-wood-expin-the-doll about mai-being-ferinds-waith yugi&ferinds
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Title: hhm i do,t-anying-about-saber-doll hop katrna undersanands joy-loves mai bcsuse joy-frees mai in faigthing-for a-ferind
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: March 05, 2008 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah nobody-touchs-mai hop katrina-undersatands joy-loves-mai-as-perovein ygo-doomaerc-epd-faigthing-for-a-ferind-joy-frees-mai-oop-i-gave-it-awy-my- bad
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Title: My opinion on this fanfic VIII
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, that was surely something! Looks like Yugi's stuck with the Saber Dolls for the rest of his life! Téa and Rebecca seemed to take it very well. As for how YMTSD:TL is going to end...well, you'll just have to be patient! All in all, this was a pretty good story, one of the most original I've seen yet. Now, perhaps I'll take a look at some of your other works, such as this "YGO/Rumble Roses" crossover. Sayounara! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Dragonandswordmaster On: September 11, 2005 19:53 CDT
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Wow, this was a good ending. It's a shame that you have to end it so soon. Hey, a certain blonde duelist isn't going back to Texas with Kat now is he? heh. Anyways, this was probably your best chapter yet! I loved it, especially the battle scene. I swear that you are one of the greatest writers that I know, it's just a shame that we cannot meet in real life. So, get started on your new story, and I'll look at it, even though I have never played Rumble Roses, i'll definitely read anything you write!
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: September 09, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think yugi can get through to them i hope very good fanfiction or yugi /isis have to destory them faust be will in big promblem i hope yugi can help them for gets to later yugi /panther or lynx i would be good idea please making some more chapters. please and thank you your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: My opinion on this fanfic VII
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, you just got back from Orlando, ne? I went there when I was about 8 or 9. I just got back from Las Vegas the week before last, in celebration of my 21st birthday! Anyway, Chapter 22. Huh...you said that Tiger would "get her way with Yugi" in this chapter. What did you mean by that? Looks like time may be running out for her, since Faust is in the YGO dimension, and Tiger might regain her memories! Will she and the other two Saber Dolls go back with Faust, or will they remain with Yugi and go to Disney World? Now I really can't wait to find out! Hurry up with Chapter 23! (^_^)
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Title: Unholiest of Reviewers!
Reviewed By: Alexander the Unholy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! So good i had to begin my own lemon version! Please, Grace my lemony mock up with your review DJ-san!
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the outsiders On: August 03, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea with ishizu getting middle of it i think yugi would be safe with her but saber dolls might not like it but i think pretty good idea.please making some more chapters with yugi/ishizu. please and thank you your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: My opinion on this fanfic VI
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 21...Well, I suppose that Bakura's manuevers in combat were okay, although I really can't see him with a monster such as King Dragun. So, you're planning on bring Faust into the story, and having him side with Dartz? And what exactly do you mean by Ishizu getting caught in the "catfight crossfire"? Is _she_ going to fall for Yugi, too? Well, I can't wait to see what happens next! (^_^)
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: July 07, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yugi and saber dolls fun is always ruined but i think they handle it now as for tiger get her way with yugi i think can handle her no promblem but panther and lynx gets going better. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: My opinion on this fanfic V
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:00 CDT
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Chapter 20...Well, there's not really much I can say about this chapter, all that happens is a bunch of living Duel Monsters clashing with other living Duel Monsters. Since the "Waking the Dragons" storyline has already ended on TV, I'm not really that interested in it anymore. However, I am looking forward to seeing how this fic ends. Will the Saber Dolls remain with Yugi forever, resulting in an eternally-jealous Téa? Will Katrina remain with Joey forever, resulting in an eternally-jealous Mai? If the Saber Dolls leave, will they somehow be sent back to their own time? Anyways, I just want to notify you all that the first chapter of my YGO/SMJ Lemon is up! Read & Review, please! (^_^)
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Title: yugi meets the saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: May 24, 2005 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fanfiction with yugi and saber dolls yugi/lynx and yugi/tiger and yugi/panther all three saber dolls and full lemon with yugi/isis ishtar. please and thank you dale ray cameronii
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Title: My opinion on this fanfic IV
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, here's my opinion on Chapters 17-19... Well, you kind of had a lemon scene between Yugi and Luchs/Lynx in Chapter 17 (I mean, she obviously had an orgasm from Yugi's breastplay). And in Chapter 18, I thought for a second that Yugi was going to give sexual pleasure to Tiger and Panther, but he didn't. And as for Chapter 19, I kind of felt that the scene where every single YGO character showed up to help defeat Fartz--gomen--Dartz was sort of...well...kind of cheesy, for lack of a better word. Granted, the "Great Leviathan" is some sort of all-powerful dragon creature, but come on! One of my most favorite elements of this fic is the firey jealously and white-hot rage exhibited by Téa and Rebecca at how the Saber Dolls are stealing Yugi away from them. I've always seen Téa as one of the strongest YGO characters, quite possibly possessing the potential to hold her own against Yugi or Kaiba in a game of Duel Monsters. I especially liked the scenes where she and Rebecca stood up against the Saber Dolls in pillow fights, even though they lost. (Téa-chan gets an "A" for effort). And the scene where Téa destroys that metal door with her bare hands was just...fuckin' A (^_^). Anyways, I'm getting close to finishing the first chapter of my Yu-Gi-Oh!/Saber Marionette J/???????? Lemon Crossover FanFic! I hope to have it up sometime next week! TTFN! (^_^)
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: May 12, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fanfiction.please making some more chapters and little yugi and all three saber dolls a lemon chapter with yugi lynx tiger panther it very good idea please and thank you. your friend dale ray cameronii
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Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ay-yi-freakin'-YI! Do you NOT like Dartz or what? Yugi had to call out the big guns this time. You should've wrote that season man.
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