| "Pink Cotton Candy Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 01:23 CST
Comment/Review:
wow...u gotta continue! i'm totally intrigued! smooches smittin! ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I really love your work and I look forword to reading more of this story. I do have one request please. Could you post the completed story called "Dirty Little Secret" and its sequel, "You Want A What?", here on mm.org, please? With AFF.net offline so much, I can't read it there anymore and it is incomplete under your other account here. It's a legend in the Inuyasha community and its one of those stories that I read again and again. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: paranoidchild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh, you've got me hooked! I can't wait for the next part - update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAH! I haven't read a deep Inuyasha fic in a long time and I'm looking foward to this one. I never really thought about the Kagome growing up thing. I can't wait for the next chappie! Upd8te soon. L8terz.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with the previous review. Your story is absolutely breathtaking in its beauty and style. It's impressive as a one-shot, but I, too, would love to know what she wishes. and as you can tell my penname, inu and kag are my favs. I'm such a romantic!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 16:56 CST
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Wow. What an amazing character exposition - you broke down Kagome's relationships with everyone in the group so concisely and accurately. Not only that, I think you nailed the essence of each character very well - again, with a great economy of words. Very impressive and insightful. :) I am not sure if your intention is to continue or if this was meant to be a thought provoking piece on its own. Personally, I do hope that if you do continue, somehow Inu and Kag get to be together. I am a ridiculously obsessive Inu-Kag fan..as unrealistic as that my or may not be! :)
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