| "Road in the Darc" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Hoshiko Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Gah, you're killin' me with these cliff hangers. Anyways, I must say I'm really glad you went down this road. I love "What-If" situations. Till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I don't normally read this kind of stuff, but since I am currently trying to fix the one I wrote, I'm having a bit of a hard time seeing how it is done. Keep it up! I love this story lots!
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Title: aka UnboundBebedora
Reviewed By: Magenta Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw, I could not imagine not owning the game. Anyways, you are right, Nafia is a wonderful character, and god bless you for not having Darc in love with Lillia. I am very interested, considering you want to bring two brothers together with a parent still alive. I hope you continue to do this well.
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