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| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Master of Yaoi Lit
Reviewed By: YaoiHentaiSenseiBoe On: January 20, 2005 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was PRETTY good, but once I get signed up, I'll show you what I can do. Trust me when I say, "I tend to get possessive with some of the Weiss Kruz characters, mainly Aya, who gets a girlfriend that's a huntress, Ken, who meets my representative, Ray Kyoto, a spiritualist, and Kyo, who ends up with another one of my representatives named Epee Balestra, a skilled but silent fencer who trusts no one with his life until Kyo steps into his heart. If you don't know who Kyo is, watch the third series on DVD called Knight Hunters (Weiss Kruz) Eternity. Aya's a hot-looking teacher (swoon). Kyo is a new member who ends up killing himself, but I make it so it wasn't really him who commit suicide. It was actually his clone, meant to scare the Weiss members away. Aya moves in with his girlfriend, Piper, who uses a blowpipe in battle with tranquilizer darts and poison missiles. Kyo staggers to their door, the next morning and it all gets better (shuts up so story doesn't get ruined). Anywho, I'll get my account soon... maybe. Check in with me time after time if you'd like to add me to your list of favorites. 'Kay? Well, 'til then, take care. ~YaoiHentaiSenseiBoe
| Title: buenagirl13
Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT... OMG... you have got to continue this... pretty pllllleeeeease... ^_^
| Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, please tell me there's more? This could so easily go on much further! Well, so the old adage is true... opposites attract... LOL Wonderful fic here. Keep 'em coming!
| Reviewed By: Drella On: November 14, 2004 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY FOR AYA-UKE! Lovely story, I'm glad Schu didn't rape Aya. That happens too often.
| Reviewed By: Drella On: November 14, 2004 07:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY FOR AYA-UKE! Lovely story, I'm glad Schu didn't rape Aya. That happens too often.
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