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| "Sweet Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: MWHAHAHAHAHAITSTHEELFYOFTERROR!
Reviewed By: Elfy_ofthe_Avari!!! On: January 09, 2005 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha... donuts of terror... that will teach sky not to eat currysalsalasagne as a midnight snack and expect a normal dream! See? Eat junk food at midnight! And don't tell your mother who stole the special brownies! MWHAHAHAHAHA! It was little imps! They're staging an attack against the gnomes! Using Internal Browniestic Missiles! No one shall understand this and you shall all read it over and over trying to see if there is any reasoning in it! Yes, I am like this all the time! No, I don't know where Mr Samsa is! But when I find him, I must kill him AGAIN! *goes off to hunt down tiny bug* Oh, and the story was good, too. I gave an 8 for sp/gr because I did catch some mistakes. I gave a nine for style of writing, because it was a good comedy, but I would've prefered it if a major character had died, because I like tragic deaths. I gave a 10 for orig/crea because I've never seen this type of fluffy humor before. I also therefore gave a ten for enjoyment factor, and a nine for overall because it's the average. Anyway, must go. Chow.
| Title: Fwaha
Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 00:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Whee. This is just suuuu much fun to type. I thought this kinda thing was against the rules though...maybe not. Shhhhh!!!
| Reviewed By: Phoxy kay On: November 16, 2004 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
**laughs** Spazed huh. Well, Like I said before, good story and Update soon. ^.~
| Reviewed By: PK (such a lazy little phox) On: November 14, 2004 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
...are you talking about Sheamaru? Just wondering ^^o. It's a funny chapter. Update soon! ~later, phox
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