| "The Awakening" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was GREAT! (expet for the editing remarks in the middle of the story) Omigod I LOOOVED it! This is the one shot I go to when I'm in need of some hentai! Oh Yeah! Boy wouldn't it be awsome if this was a full story??
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: inuyasha666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that's all I have to say...Wow...
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Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
*giggle* not a dry seat in the house. that was HOT! ^__^ ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: glirwin On: February 16, 2005 12:52 CST
Comment/Review:
great lemon and one shot, that was really hot. Now that every one, encluding myself, has told you how great it is, I think there are some editing notes still in there. if removed this would be even better.
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Title: hot damn!
Reviewed By: tiffany_ten On: February 03, 2005 21:57 CST
Comment/Review:
...I think I need a cigarette. j/k mmm...dominating Inu is gooood ;)....but yes, what about the centapede demon? oh well. it's still frickin great!
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Reviewed By: inurozelvr On: February 02, 2005 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was great PLEASE write more I would love to read it! And WOW!
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Reviewed By: TwilightZone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...that was...fucking great!! You so should turn it into a whole storym, it wouls be an awesome start!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! *blush* *gasp* HOT damn! I know this is supposed to be a one-shot as an alternate beginning, but is there any chance of expanding for another chapter or two? I'd like to see at least until they start the quest, especially considering the question of "what about the Centipede Youkai?" and when the villagers come in after that. I'd like to see Inuyasha's reactions to that. Well, regardless, this was AMAZING.
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Reviewed By: Sasha starr On: December 01, 2004 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
THAT FUCKING ROCKS!!!!!!! Why did it have to be a one-shot?
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Reviewed By: laina On: November 28, 2004 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now that would have been a kick~a$$ way to start the story!!! I loved it.
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Title: Cool... no, beyond cool
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one hell of a one-shot! Man, that was so good... wow, wow and bloody hell... You're good with these, REALLY good. If you're ever interested, check out my stories as well since i'll be checking out yours from now on, see ya!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats was fucking great the only word i could think of to describe it was "wow" lol that to me is sad lol but it says allot ^_^ god u need to write more stories ^_^ more 1shots because there the best hehehe more inu/kag/ hentai romance 1shots lol >.< lol well ummmmm write more ill be watching ^_^ Kuro p.s lol i love what scherezade wrote lol thats hairy ass and yes i agree with her lol xD
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (really too lazy to login) On: November 15, 2004 02:52 CST
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I love this! Really, it was steamy and hot, just the way I love it ^_~ Will you write more? I hope so!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 14, 2004 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! its to bad its only a one shot...
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 16:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Wooooohoooooooo! LadyCat has unleashed her hentai writing skills to set forth another delightful lemon between Inu and Kag! The world is now a happier and more satisfying place to be! Me love lemons...especially LadyCat style: dominant Inu with a feisty but secretly submissive Kagome. C'mon girls, if you had studly Inuyasha panting after you, wouldn't you melt too?? Sigh.
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