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| "Honda, Bakura, and the Three Trolls" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggle* That was a cool idea. The shonen-ai was kinda noticeable...but then, everyone is like that with everyone else in the series. Yami Bakura seemed very in character, Tristan and Ryou too, but I noticed Yami Bakura mostly beacause he's a little more in character than he usually is in fanfiction. Great job. :)
| Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:08 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great story... shows an unusual side of Yami Bakura there, that no one had really seen. Too bad Honda wouldn't remember it, eh? this is great like this, if you wanted to leave it as it is, but adding another chapter after this would be good as well I'm sure! Great job!
| Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: November 14, 2004 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Loved it. Please make another chapter. I think it would make it even better.
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