| "The Golden Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: April 29, 2006 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Absolutely loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! ^_^ I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli again On: March 29, 2006 19:47 CST
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There seems to be an awful lot of apprehension and regret(?) in this chapter from both couples - Jou and Seth; Ryou, Spirit of the Ring Bakura, and Thief Bakura. The story took an unexpected twist. Although it pains me in a way that Ryou and Thief Bakura... didn't get it on... it was the right thing to do (or not to do... however you want to look at it!) Thief Bakura is in love with Seth so it would have been very, very bad for him to be with Ryou. It turns out that the lust Thief Bakura may have had for Ryou was indeed the Spirit's? Hmm... It looks like Ryou and the Bakuras are off to Kaiba Mansion... and maybe some much needed answers. Still loving it! Thanks for the quick update!
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: March 28, 2006 21:50 CST
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The imagery of Ryou and Bakura in a bathroom naked alone is enough to make one swoon! I liked how you gave insights into Ryou's modesty and how he felt "sexy" walking around his own house naked. It seems that Ryou might be feeling some of the affects of having the time traveling Bakura in Ryou's time? Ryou washing and/or caressing Bakura's body in the shower while pumping him (poor choice of words, perhaps) for information was interesting. You made it clear that Ryou is not pleased to know that Bakura had and still has a thing for the Priest. Oh yes, jealousy reared its ugly head. The whole tub scene was wonderful. Ryou drifting away and becoming confused, worried about the Ring, his own Bakura, blacking out... and evil cliffhanger! I am just thrilled you found inspiration and kept going with this fiction. Look forward to more and discovering the mystery of the time travellers... and more Ryou and Bakura, naturally!
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Title: Vamp468-(i don't feel like logging in)
Reviewed By: evenin' On: March 28, 2006 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know, while I loved this chapter and all. I can't help get the feeling that I should go back and read the other seven chappies. ::laughs tiredly:: Or I'll do it tommorow. Either way this kicked ass!
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Title: whooyee
Reviewed By: Sisco (to lazy to log in) On: May 23, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must have more chicka! I dying of yaoi exhaustion over here. XD!!! Please update soon! *hugs* I luvs ya! =^.^=
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Title: Happy Belated Birthday!! / Now that I've sucked up to you...more, please?
Reviewed By: whosjeebus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! Very original and engaging, with spot on characterization. Can't wait for the next update! Very interested in seeing where the thickening plot takes us next. Thanks for the great read, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: VamPyro On: March 24, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duh-duh-duh! Cliff hangers are EVIL!!! Please Write the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Yves On: March 21, 2005 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story! It is so original and exciting-- Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon Plz!
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Reviewed By: hikari_enzeru On: February 13, 2005 02:08 CST
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WOW i loooooove it, omg this is GREAT. i was gettin SO mad b/c i couldn't find any good story's but i found yours!. man this is just awesome. though end it right there at a cillf, come on, come on hurry with the next chap! i cant WAIT. up date soon PLEASE and keep up the good work!^_^
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too busy to log in) On: February 11, 2005 12:38 CST
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Love it. I hope the thief king is going to go easy on Ryou. I know how he feels about him.
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Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: January 09, 2005 22:43 CST
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forgive me I was so excited I let my spelling slip your story is wonderful I want to read more
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Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: January 09, 2005 22:36 CST
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great uptae soon
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Reviewed By: spendragon87 2lazy2log On: November 17, 2004 18:54 CST
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awsome!!! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 22:22 CST
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Haha, awsome! I'm still chuckling... most excellent chaos, I love it! I can't wait until the rest meet these two characters... a few pants are gonna be wet! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset ( to tired to log in) On: November 14, 2004 14:53 CST
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I love this. I can`t wait to find out what is going on.
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