| "Transmutation" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the idea is so unique. Well written, hot lemon scene. Good job
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Reviewed By: Nimue_Okusan On: July 11, 2006 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing~! This is the hottest fic I've ever read!! It's so cleverly written and I enjoyed it immensely! I really like how you involved all four characters in this unique lovemaking sequence. I've never seen a fic quite like this and I'm so glad I had a chance to read yours. One of my favorite parts is how you made Malik experience sex through a woman's perspective. I also liked how you made Malik compare the sensations he got as an aroused man with those he receives when he's aroused in a woman's body. The part where Ryou jumps up to get the condom from his jeans was also really wonderful. Very delicious fic overall. Thanks for writing this masterpiece!!
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Title: ~luv'in it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~
Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg u explained the desires of woman and men wonderfully u are awsome You really know how to write a good story, plez don't think i'm meaning offence but i wanted to request a sequal maybe a relationship between the 4 it's only a seggestion i thought it sounded interesting well anyway even if u don't ur story still is one of the best i've ever read so good job and good kuck with future stories! oh and could u possibly email me when u have any other stories ur posting cuz i would luv to here them: Shadow_stalker005@hotmail.com * if it's not to much trouble thanx!*
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. Very nice. It's strangely thrilling that you made all four of them active, and it managed to maintain an element of realism despite how impossible the situation could be. The Ryou X Bakura part was cute, and the way you wove in everyone's personalities made it interesting. Thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: kumo180 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a great chapter! Finally some bakura/ryou action ^_~ I'd love a fluffy bakura/ryou pic! My emails snuggle_cow@yahoo.com Congrats on the $100
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Reviewed By: kumo180 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow this was so good! I wish you would add another chapter where Malik gets his body back and wants to be with bakura. If you do (which i hope you will) it would be nice if you put it on this story, that way it'll notify me. Loved the little Bakura Ryou romance.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (still to lazy to log in) On: February 22, 2005 06:14 CST
Comment/Review:
ok, cool, plz continue, wonder if Malik is gonna lose total control, I hope so
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Reviewed By: Takiko Okuda On: February 15, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! This is a great fic! I totally love the Marik/Malik(whatever) in Anzu's body thing. I read a similar one on ff.net but you really nailed it! Please update soon, i really want to see what happens!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kumo180 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 20:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really niffty story. I hope you update sooner than last time. I can't wait to see waht happens! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:23 CST
Comment/Review:
rofl Well, this is a little different, but most interesting! Please update soon, I'm curious as to how this will continue... after all, is Anzu a virgin? If so, then they really can't go all the way without her knowing, right? Or will Bakura really care if she is or not? Update soon please?
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: November 14, 2004 19:41 CST
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I like this, however I do prefer yaoi this could be interesting, what with Malik in Anzu`s body, gotta wonder what she is dreaming about.
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