| "Pointilism" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:57 CDT
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Those were fantastic! I've had this in my favorites for awhile, and read it a few times but never reviewed - just wanted you to know that it makes me smile every time!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe*nsi* On: March 24, 2005 20:24 CST
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That. Is. So. Sweet. :)
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: January 20, 2005 19:54 CST
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Y'know, maybe it's just me, but it seems that Sango and Miroku are your favorite couple! *smirk* Lovely drabbles, as usual. The one where Sango is an exchange student...great. The formatting on the stories is messed up, though. They aren't paragraphs like normal, they're just one big block with tab-spaces where the paragraph would normally be. Happy writing, and I'm hoping you find inspiration for your long on-going stories soon! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 21:49 CST
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That was so cute! And all just because Kagome agreed with Sango and turned and waved! :) And no, I didn't get the double meeting of the title. :( I sat there for a moment and tried to figure it out, but I just gave up. Hehehe. Oh, and by the way, I love your double scenarios! They're awesome. I like how you show that one decision can change everything!!!! Can't wait to see more! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These are incredible! I love them so much...keep writing! I'd so give this a higher rating, was I able to...Please keep writing to save my sanity. lol. ^____^
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Reviewed By: HuntersOfTheDusk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i could give a better rating, I would've. :( Anyways, you're style of writing is amazing. I've been keeping up with this story on both mediaminer and ff.net, and I love every single chapter. It's really good how you keep a balance between both types of stories. Anwyays, I'm probably just babling now, so it was yet another great chapter. keep up the good work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: December 11, 2004 21:33 CST
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*Sigh* You always seem to put up one depressing ficlet and one cute one to even things out! Jeez, how sad, the one called "Final" eek! Poor Inu! Does it make you mad that I'm like your only reviewer? It would probably piss me off. Sorry dearie! Haha I just wrote "dearie"! I think somethings wrong with me! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: December 08, 2004 13:32 CST
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I'm assuming that Liberation was Kagura and Naraku, because of the whole 'free' theme-ness. Hahaha I can just imagine Naraku slamming into a door! Bittersweet was so sad! That would suck if Takahashi really did finish him off by letting the Kazaana suck him into...himself...weird. Awesome double update!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 30, 2004 23:35 CST
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Ha, it really was a double update! See I thought mm.org was just being anal and giving me two update notices for a single chapter like it sometimes does. I hate that. Lol, stalker much? That was cute. "What did I do?" *realizes he's blown his cover and runs away* I love your ficlets! Muah! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 30, 2004 23:30 CST
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I really hate not being signed in when I review, but I check directly from my email, so there ya go. This one was sad. Have I ever mentioned before how I love the perspective you always put on Kikyo? In case I haven't mentioned it, hey, I love the perspective you always put on Kikyo. :) I like how she's not always some evil bitch. That's cool. One part I didn't get though..."The world didn't remember spies." Who is the spy in the story? I got confuzzled. Anywho, happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 24, 2004 13:40 CST
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Well, sheesh, thanks for making me feel bad for Kikyo! *storms away from the computer* No, I'm kidding, it was a fantastic perspective piece. I'm looking forward to more. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 13:57 CST
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only 100 words each? that's one hell of a way to challenge yourself! good job!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 14, 2004 22:09 CST
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Shit, well that was depressing, at least the second one. You know, I've never written a ficlet. The ones I usually read are boring and rather pointless, but these two are deliciously good; they actually give a window into the character's wants/feelings/lives. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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