| "Inappropriate Behavior" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story
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Reviewed By: tammyzora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 03:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome story, very realistic.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh, I loved it. A horny but reluctant Vegeta and a determined Bulma. Nicely paced narrative and that good ole fashioned sexual tension. I've got a soft spot for that tail spot fanon. That first scene was Bulma drying V's back was fun. Long live the B/V!
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was amazing!! It was sooo funny!! And amusing!! You just HAD to keep reading to find out what would happen next!! The way you protrayed Vegeta was sooo comical!! XD Bulma's one determined woman!! ;-) All the reactions of the characters were in character, and everything was smooth XD I loved it! Continue writing!
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