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| "Heaven Knows" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: I'm sold on this pairing
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not used to Raditz/Vegeta pairings I wasn't sure about this at first. But it's very well done, and I think I'm sold on the possibilities, even though I'm a hard core V/B. Radditzu needs someone to love, and Vegeta makes sense to me... considering how Vegeta is regarding Goku... there's a lot of nice tension there because of their difference in class.
| Reviewed By: Kimmy Jarl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Great story, I love the way it is written, so... smooth and kind of solid. It really pulled me in. And it fits so well with the manga! Amazing. I never really thought about writing Raditz/Vegeta, but you make me want to try.
| Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72-not logged in On: November 20, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew-that was hot. Great job. The writing was brilliant and the sex was... well... HOT.
| Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me love! Wow, I really love your writing. You are just so good at writing Vegeta! You describe his personality so good. It cracked me up how he was like "Get off of me" at the end and told Radditz to "Shut up". Haha, that was great. Please write something else soon, maybe something with a couple chapters!
| Reviewed By: Temptation/Tempest On: November 17, 2004 01:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I have to admit, that was just beautiful. I have never seen the afterlife described so perfectly. I really enjoyed Radditz thoughts, especially about the 'whipped candies'. Also the tears in Vegeta's eyes and how he spoke about Kakarot being the last Saiyan was very emotional to me. The best line, If he his my heaven than I must be his hell. Loved it! It vividly brings to mind all of lifes little contrasts that you never fully think about.
| Reviewed By: GutterBall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, debbiechan! That was WONDERFUL! Poor Raditz, but DAMN! And ain't it just like Vegeta to get a world-class world-rocking and be thinking about something else the whole time. *shakes head* "He had wicked stamina." Absolutely priceless. I'd give you more than 10 on the "originality" slot if I could, d-chan. That was truly a one-of-a-kind plot, there. Heh, and I still think Luther Reigns would make a LOVELY Raditz - if they did something about his face. Legs? Hell, yeah. Body? Perfection Face? Mm...not so much.
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