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| "Quarantined" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Setosgal On: April 12, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. Why did the OX King kill himself??? I think you should have a happy ending or maybe you could write both. The sad and happy ending so reviewers can review on which one they like the best. Is this a Bulla & Gohan fic? I hope it is because they're really cute together! Anyways, please keep up the GREAT work! Sincerely, Setosgal (P.s. this is heaffy! ;p)
| Reviewed By: IcedCamaro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 04:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd have to say that this is a breath of fresh air. It's very creative, very original and all out, very different from the norm. I usually hate made-up characters and yet, Bulla seems very likeable and intelligent, someone that a reader could sympathize with. She's young, she's humane and she's understandable. You could work a little harder on grammar and punctuation but I found this very enjoyable to read. In fact, I can't stand reading hetero fics and have to this day, never made an exception when it comes to Gohan fics. Thus, you should realize that you truly are exceptional! You've made this... what's the word I'm thinking? I'd say its very post-apocolyptic, a genre that I myself have worked on and believe me, it's NOT for the talentless or faint of heart. Takes alot of skill and boldness, both of which I see that you have alot of potential for. So definetly, keep up the good work and always feel free to email me (IcedCamaro@aol.com or TheVegasQueen@aol.com) with comments or suggestions or even just to let me know when the newest chapter will be out. I'm genuinely looking forward to it. Sincerely, Camaro
| Reviewed By: kiba's girl On: November 15, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story,it made me tear up. Please have a happy ending. There is too much saddness in the world, I read fan fic to escape for a little while. Thanks and keep writing,please update soon!
| Title: "Oh Yeah!!"
Reviewed By: VirginGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job!! Though I swear if you don't make it a happy ending I will break every bone in your body!! LoL!! Write more soon!! Cya at skull!! "Oh Yeah!!" Says the Cool Aid Man.
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