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Reviewed By: loussi_leb_ru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ngh!!! *fans self* More please!!! *heads for cold shower*
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 03:01 CDT
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Wow, I inspire people! *sparkly eyes* I'm glad you liked Teaching Gohan. This is an interesting story so far, I hope you finish it. I must admit I was worried about Jaia at first, but I think the fact that she's an ordinary girl (though I am curious what "genetically perfect" entails) and that she didn't want to have sex with Goku prove she's not a Mary Sue. The only parts that creep me out were that bit about Gohan thrusting *through* Videl's jeans (yahh!) and Vegeta being with his 12-yr old daughter. Funny how I don't flinch at most m/m incest but m/f still gives me the willies. You can argue though, that in ancient societies like the Egyptians, m/f incest was often encouraged in order to keep the royal blood royal- brothers married sisters all the time- and in the Bible there was an instance of several daughters sleeping with their father in order to continue the family line; also girls were given in marriage at much younger ages than we're used to today (when the life expectancy was only thirty-something, they wanted to get started early). So, hey, they're fictional aliens- we can write Saiyan customs and instincts the way we want. You write wonderfully nasty lemons, btw. Just raunchy, passionate, freaky monkey sex. Romance and emotions and tenderness are great, but sometimes I just want to read something NASTY.^^
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Reviewed By: Delariean On: February 12, 2005 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great You touched on Vegita/Bra......great lemon....sometimes I wish they were longer but I'm haapy..... Hey...Where's Goten thru all of this.....Would like Goku/Karrott as his next victim :) or even Gohan...so many possilbilites.... keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful, of course! Update soon. Ooh, bulma is half right, I think. Does she suspect that it was Vejita who impregnated the girl? Anyway, I'm sure we'll all find out later -wink- Great work!
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Title: refreshing and bizarre!
Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so weird, and unusual. Bizarre! So I love it. I don't know what else to say but if I had thought of anything, be sure it wouldn't have been bad. You're a good writer and you're very creative. Plus you're the first hentai-fic author i ever reviewed. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Delariean On: February 02, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic.....I was wondering if you were going to touch on Vegita/Bra and what they did, but to each his own..... can't wait who Kakarot gets next
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Title: Kept reading :)
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I'm a little uncomfortable with incest, period, but still, I kept on reading. As a human reading this story, I felt uncomfortable with that and the Videl rape that turned into sex, BUT, I kept on reading and still found the story interesting and want to see what happens next. So, great job. I'm very curious about what will happen between Trunks and Gohan (my favorite pairing anyway ;)). And have to say that at least the incest and rape is explained by the natural instincts of Saiyan ritual (still squirmed a bit, but hey, that's natural). and I'm very intrigued about "Goku" having not much time left and "Kakarot" being someone almost outside of Goku. :D Also usually not a fan of OC that is too much a part of the main story, but you managed, as I said earlier, to keep me reading and intrigued. So - great!
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Reviewed By: Ore No Kagami(Atarah) On: February 02, 2005 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..........Opppppppppppppppppppppppppssssssssss....It said that there was an error and i tried to enter it again...and again...and again...Big ooooopppppppppppsssssssssssss
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Reviewed By: Ore No Kagami(Atarah) On: February 02, 2005 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lved it! I love everything about this story! I can't wait until the next chapter! PLease hurry the next chapter...are you going to have a Goku/Trunks lemon? thats my fav. pairing, so ...please? Even if you don't, ill come back to read more...but that would be sooooo cool. Can't wait until the next chapter!
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Title: EEEEEEEEHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ore No Kagami(Atarah) On: February 02, 2005 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lved it! I love everything about this story! I can't wait until the next chapter! PLease hurry the next chapter...are you going to have a Goku/Trunks lemon? thats my fav. pairing, so ...please? Even if you don't, ill come back to read more...but that would be sooooo cool. Can't wait until the next chapter!!
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Title: EEEEEEEEHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ore No Kagami(Atarah) On: February 02, 2005 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lved it! I love everything about this story! I can't wait until the next chapter! PLease hurry the next chapter...are you going to have a Goku/Trunks lemon? thats my fav. pairing, so ...please? Even if you don't, ill come back to read more...but that would be sooooo cool. Can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lalal girl On: February 02, 2005 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow that was a great chapter i luv the gh/t bits
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Reviewed By: princess kadeta On: January 17, 2005 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loveit thats all i can say thats all i have words for i love it though you need to UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Ore No Kagami(Atarah) On: December 13, 2004 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo When are you gonna have the V/t and Gk/T. I sooo love those two pairing. Gk/T is m favorite pairing, yet I've only found a few. *sniff* I can't wait for more, please update soon, please! *gravels at Authors feet* PLease oh mighty Author-sama. PLease!
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: Plyric - don't feel like signing in On: December 01, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE! Very nice! This was an EXTREMELY pleasurable chapter! MORE!
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