| "castle of new hope" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Trunks187 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got around to reading the rest of the chapters. The story just got really interesting but there are still thsoe annoying grammar problems. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Trunks187 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 08:08 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read some more chapters. Even though this is a good story, you seem to have some grammar problems all over the place. Some sentences are broken off badly, and you have problems with the comma. Otherwise it's still a good story. Oh, and thanks for e-mailing me about the vampire thing.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Trunks187 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the first six Chapters, and this is an interesting story, although the beginning really confused me (Mitch with the vampires especially). I'll read more of this fic later.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 14:05 CST
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ok now that i've calmed down i've desided that if you want I will edit and help you with what I can alright.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 12:41 CST
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WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO CELEST?!!?!?! Celest: *twitches*..... DAMN YOU!! The least you could have done was try to keep MY Character like I designed her. NEXT TIME ASK BEFORE COMPLETY ALTERING MY MUSE!!!!! *GROWLS* Anyways I'll review the story after i read the rest....*muttering evily*
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