"Diary of A Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Emotional Story Reviewed By: DBZFan On: June 23, 2005 11:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! This is such a great and sad sotry! I loved it! It made me cry! I wish you had written more. It ended too soon.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 00:56 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I read this story like years ago, and I just now found it again. i am soooo bawling my eyes out right now. Thank you for this excellent story, I am off again to read the second part!
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Reviewed By: Ore No Kagami(Atarah) On: December 12, 2004 23:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: So sad Kuso! How come every thing I read tonight is sad? Why? Oh well. That aside. Very good story, I can't wait for more. PLease post more. Please!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, please oh please update soon. PLease!!!! Pleaaaaseeee!!!!*on knees* Please? PLease!!!
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Reviewed By: BlakSpirit_4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved this fic! I feel really sad for Vegeta. I wished your would make more chapters, though! 6 isn't enough!!
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Reviewed By: jademooonstar@aol.com On: November 28, 2004 16:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! I cna't believe this, I love this story even thought trunks is gay. BUt its really sweet the way Vegeta is reading his diary.I really feel bad for him, because its took late for him to talk to Trunks about all this. Sigh, if only they could have talked a bit more. I was ready to cry serveral times and I can't wait for more so please update real soon. I'll be waiting ^_^
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Reviewed By: Atarah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 14:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, one more note, this is going on my favs! Hehe. Trunks: *hits Atarah on the head* You're supposed to be asleep. Atarah: Atarah dizzy...*falls over*
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Reviewed By: Atarah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 14:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *impatient (Trunks: As always)* Atarah: *jumping up and down in seat* More! More! More! More! More! More! Trunks: *grabs Atarah by the shoulders* Calm down girl, don't make me leash you! Atarah: *ears go down and she wimpers* Trunks: Good girl. Atarah: *happy* Trunks: What I think Atarah MEANT to say was that she really- Atarah: Really really really really really- Trunks: *gags Atarah* Likes your story and would greatly- Atarah: *chews through gag* greatly greatly greatly greatly greatly greatly- Trunks: *hits her on the head, knocking her unconscience* as I was saying, she would greatly appreciate it if you updated it really soon. Atarah: *dizzy* sooon...... Trunks: Well, she'll be back and review when you do. Atarah: please do update....*falls asleep* Trunks: *pets Atarah* Good girl.
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