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| "A Second Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 05:03 CST
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My friend Lady_Rin_remix archives all of the Rin stories she finds, and she emails picks to everyone every week. This was a recent one, and I'm glad I was able to read it! My only complaint about this story is that they characters fall in love literally overnight. I understand it's a oneshot, and I also understand the concept of sex without love is hard for alot of people, myself included. Other than that, it's very well written. Your Inuyasha is exact, to the T. Great job. ;)
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 12:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Reviews are for reviewing the story, if you don't like the pairing, I'd suggest reading a different story. Do not use the reviews to tell the author their pairing sucks.~Fanilia
| Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: November 18, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write really well I'll admit. Kagome died three years before, I understand, but Rin breaking up with Sesshoumaru five minutes before having sex with Inuyasha and claiming it's love is just plain slutty. They hadn't even known eachother for a day. I understand them feeling some sort of connection when they saw eachother, but I would like to think that one of them would love to make their relationship bloom before stating it's love. To me it was good, but like I said, slutty.
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