| "Beach Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: veronica_dis_spell On: April 29, 2005 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, and written very well. I would love to hear more. Also I liked how it was his brother who found them.
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Title: Beach Fun
Reviewed By: Lady Megani15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. Gives people orgasms just reading the selection.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 22:28 CST
Comment/Review:
nice. im inspired. write more.
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